Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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Amira

@amira039.303

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Intriguing start, pls continue - looking forward to the next update

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

wow, I really liked it

something nice and different

looking forward to the next 2 parts..

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sreemeera

@sreemeera

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Very interesting and different concept.

Each of your story concept is different and not any way related to each other.

In this one you have portrait Arnav slightly dark character.

Khushi is bold and loved her character even from the first chapter.

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

A 3-shot strictly...

HUH...

Let's see..😈

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pmehra300

@pmehra300

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Mind blowing update

Loved it

Really like the concept of your new story

Eagerly waiting to read more

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msmarple

@msmarple

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Great!

A new story from you.

Loved chapter one.

looking forward to the next.

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Aanchal15

@Aanchal15

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Apologies for the belated comment, Jenny.. just espied that you had penned an Arshi three shot...

I loved the milieu, the intrigue around Major Raizada,..the graceful gait, despite the limp, the lazy gaze, but, his trained eye not missing any detail, and, his discerning mind able to deduce, that the new main dancer is a novice...

Their meeting was so demogogic, that it perturbed Khushi ...and, the last few lines made me think about the 1973 Vinod Khanna movie- Achanak ( which was inspired by a true story)...await to read next with suppressed excitement...