Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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MAS_5253

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

wow jenny a new concept n a different 1 must say ..r u sure only 3 shots ...
m already lykin it cntnu sun

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Deepti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Mysterious indeed... And what a perfect start...👍🏼 So different from your other stories...

Arnav is dark and mysterious. And I'd love to see this mystery unfold.. I don't know if he shot his wife or best friend or not but I'm sure there is definitely something more to it...

Although I know Khushi is doing this some financial problem but I really want to know, whom she was referring to..

Absolutely loved it..❤️❤️

Update soon, or I'll die out of curiosity...😆😃

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ipktouch

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

omg omg omg superb n fabulous start jenny..awesome update..So Arnav is a ex-major n Kushi is a bar dancer..ofcourse these 2 ppl intoxicate us with their chemistry..arnav is charmed by kushi..and what made her fear at 11.30..is there who is using her income out of benefit?and arnav is strange n kissed her..what feeling was that?!considering his past mystery he seems lyk a devastated man n what special in kushi he saw in her..i wish this shud be an ff n not ts..coz this genre is new n wud be thrilling n exciting if u wud prefer to continue for more chappy..waiting eagerly for the next update..

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saarah96

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

wow that was brilliant start to the story
woah,,arnav killed his wife and his best friend
khushi must be freaked out now
and who is the man she was worried about?
hope it is not her hubby?
continue please!=]