VirMan OS: Date Rush

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TeriKhamoshiyan

@TeriKhamoshiyan

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

AND A SEVENTH PART! AND A EIGTH PART! AND A NINTH PART! AND A TENTH PART!
AND SO MANY MORE THAT I AM GETTING TIRED OF TELLING YOU HOW MANY MORE PARTS I WANT!

and don't worry jen, I made ur life so much easier I resed all these spots for u so u can update easier! 🤣

just send me the chapters when ur done with them, and I'll post them!

see how caring I am jen!😆

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negha

@negha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

AWESOME OS...

Loved it...Virman Meeting was Nice..

Date Rush..Perfect..

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roshreb

@roshreb

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

awesome OS..everything so unique..the concept, title, banner, virman first meeting..love & enjoyed each & every bit !! the dialogues & the double meaning in some ..the don't rape me part was hilarious ..u can't end it like that..expecting a part 2 ..thanks for the pm

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nrithyao

@nrithyao

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

fantastic os
loved virman a lot
loved the way they met & how he took her along with him & ended up being in the men's room
the part where she misunderstood him that he was about to rape her was funny
loved the dialogue which virat said after coming to know that she was his date
thanks a lot for the pm

wonder why i cant like any post on IF

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5roseparvin

@5roseparvin

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

thank u friend for ur pm and this wonderful os... I like this os very much...

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nahaananya

@nahaananya

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

god it was so amazingly hilarious 😆
u r such a fab writer yaar 😛
i want all parts of dis os...please (puppy face)😳
i was laughing like a mad ..😆😆..so good sense of humour ufff hhahha
plzzz do write more 👏
nd thnx a lot fr d pm dear ...
take care love ya 😳
anne

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manahil arif

@innocentmanvi1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

if u have started then do complete itother wise i will kill u ir is so intresting n zainab u r tooo goood wat an analysis !!!!

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mridula

@-Minion-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

amezing os.virman moment in bathroom was awesome.virat give her his pant and their little kiss awesome.virat was manvi date surprising.u would continue this.its really geart