VirMan OS: Date Rush

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TeriKhamoshiyan

@TeriKhamoshiyan

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Hey ugly where is the reply to my amazing analysis!?

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Surish

@Surish

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

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Nikita

@Duggukede

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

super OS

loved it soo much

pm when you write more

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virman_superhit

@virman_superhit

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Hey... I read ur OS... I liked it so much... 😊😉.. Such an awesome and a different story... 👏👏..

Loved everything about it.. So cute when they were in the washroom and were playing with water.. And their kiss.. So romantic..😳😉..

And the fact that they ended up being each other's date was so sweet and unexpected... 😊👏..

Plzzz if possible write another part and show them together... It was just too good..😊👏

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Nikhita Dixit

@ambarsariya

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

HEY,,IT WAS SO COOL...😊😊

MET AS STRANGERS AND ULTIMATELY😛😛 ENDED UP AS A COUPLE...WOW...😆😉

SUPERB CONCEPT...👏👏

WISH YOU WRITE MORE...😃😃

PLZZ DO PM ME...😊😊

LOVED IT...⭐️⭐️

ND THANKS 4 THAT SEPERATE PM TOO!!😆😆

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Meenal

@Cute_Meenal

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

its really nice dear do pm me when you will write and also thanks for informing about your story

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Awesome OS>..and Lovely Topic with the banner...Different and Nice!!!

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

This is just brilliant!! I loved it a lot ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️.. The title, banner, concept, characterisation, dialogues, everything is just amazing.. Superb work! 👏👏 Please continue this one! Would love to read more.. Take care 😊

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

LOVED THE OS THAT WAS SO CUTE LOVED THEIR FIGHT IN THE BATHROOM AND THEIR CUTE REDRESSING AND SO LOVED THE LAST LINE ALREADY ON THE FIRST DATE AND SHE GOT HIM OUT OF HIS PANTS ROCKING OS THANKS FOR THE PM