VirMan OS: Date Rush

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Hey, girlies! 😃I wrote another OS on VirMan. I know my stories really irritate you guys but what to do? I can't stay without writing a story! I hope you guys will enjoy it...

Happy reading!šŸ˜›


VirMan OS: Date Rush

Skirts.

I pulled a disgusted scowl as I rummaged in my sister's closet, trying to find a decent piece of clothing that doesn't practically expose your whole being. She just had to take my last pair of clean pants on the day of my double date.

I scowled even more.

Double date.

If I didn't owe Katrina those 50 dollars, I would've never been dragged mercilessly to this ridiculous way of socializing with the other person.

I sighed hopelessly as I aimlessly threw the shortest shorts known to mankind to the pile of clothes. I let my body fall lazily on the heap of skirts when something caught my eye.

I picked up a skirt that stopped just above the knee.

It was tight and it was pink.

I quickly slipped into the skirt and exited the house quickly, hurriedly rushing towards my car.

I could feel myself getting annoyed at the limited stretching my legs are allowed due to the tightness of the skirt.

As I drove my way towards the mall, traffic caught up with the bad mood that I was already in.

I had no clean clothes. I am forced to go on a double date. I am wearing a tight pink skirt.

And I am late.

I felt the annoyance inside me evaporate slowly as I got inside the mall.

There were a lot of people, but not a lot as to bump shoulders with another. I faintly notice a group of girls gathering and discussing something in urgent voices, I shrugged it off and walked around, trying to find the store that Katrina wanted for us to meet in.

My eyes began to flicker around in curiosity as I began to notice the number of the girls gradually increasing and the volume of their voices getting louder.

What the hell was happening?

I quicken my pace and the distance between the girls and I grew farther and farther.

I sighed in relief.

I turned the corner sharply and out of nowhere, a body crashed into mine with such intensity, it sent both of us falling to the floor.

We groaned in unison, I closed my eyes for a moment as I saw stars. When I slowly opened them, a hand was offered to me. I took the hand graciously, not bothering to look up.

As I attempted to stand back up...

Oh. My. Merciful.God.

My eyes widened and I looked down at my skirt and my suspicions were true.

I just ripped my skirt.

And it wasn't even a cute, little, tiny rip. It was a huge one.

I stared at the skirt in horror when I heard it.

The deadly scream.

"OH MY GOOOD! THERE HE IS! GET HIM!" squealed one of the girls in the group excitedly, pointing frantically at my direction.

Before I could react, the hand that was holding me harshly pulled me up and broke out into a run, dragging me along with him. Screams erupted loudly from behind me.

I didn't see who he was.

All I know was that this stranger was leading me to God knows where while frantic, screaming girls chased after us.

This is not my day, AT ALL.

I tried to pull my hand away but his grip was too strong, we kept running and twisting and turning until finally, we burst inside a well-hidden men's room that people rarely used.

Before I could fully enter, hands began to pull harshly at my clothes.

I glared at the girls angrily and tugged their hands away. "Stop pulling my clothes! I don't want to come out of this bathroom stark naked!" I screamed warningly at them.

The stranger tried to close the door with a loud grunt.

After the door got closed with so much struggling, the pulling hands were gone...

I banged hard on the door, completely angered.

"I am going to kill all of you once I get decent clothes!"

"Stop trying. They're not going to listen, anyway." Said the stranger suddenly from behind me.

I felt my body stiffen and I turned around.

I felt myself freeze on the spot.

"My fans can get a little crazy." He said sheepishly, ruffling his well-known hair.

Apparently, I am stuck in a men's bathroom with a torn skirt, with teen sensation Virat Vadhera standing in front of me.

"I noticed." I said, raising my eyebrows and shrugging nonchalantly.

He looked down at the floor and sighed.

"I'm really sorry for dragging you into this." He started approaching me, I felt my heart quicken in nervousness.

"I'm Virat, by the way, Virat Vadhera. But I'm guessing you probably knew that" He said in a friendly yet shy tone, putting out a hand for me to shake.

I took it, feeling completely awkward with the whole situation. "I'm Manvi. Manvi Tandon. But I'm guessing you probably knew that." I responded, giving a small smile.

A smile crept on his lips.

"That's not all I know. I can tell you right now your favorite color is blue." He said confidently, a mischievous glint in his eyes.

"What? How'd you""

My face flushed into an immediate red and I scowled at him.

"Stop looking at my underwear!"

He chuckled. "I'm sorry, it's all bright. It's pretty hard not to take notice of."

I put my head against the wall miserably. "Well, you're not the only one who's going to notice once I come out of this bathroom."

I let a groan slip out of my mouth as Virat went silent. I turned around and instantly turned back to face the wall once more in panic.

"What are you doing?!" I shrieked loudly as he removed his pants just a few feet away from me.

I could feel him moving closer to me. I shut my eyes tightly and pressed my body against the wall, "Don't rape me!" I yelled.

A loud laugh came from Virat. "Who says I'm going to rape you? Here..." I opened my eyes and see him holding up his pants to me.

"Wear it." He said.

I looked at the pants and then at his body. He was wearing a white v-neck shirt and was now in his checkered boxers.

"Won't that leave you uhm, I don't know, pants-less?" I asked, raising an eyebrow.

"It will. But the less clothes I wear, the happier my fans will be." He said, shrugging and grinning.

I still held a look of apprehension. "Come on, I was the one who got you into this mess. The least I could do is get you into my pants." He said, trying to control the smirk at the double-meaning of his sentence.

"Gee. Isn't that just every girl's dream?" I said mockingly, taking his pants and slipping into them.

"And yet, you're the only one who got it." He replied, winking.

I adjusted the belt and with a twirl, I looked at him.

"How do I look?"

He gave me a lopsided smile.

"Perfect."

He leaned against the sink and scratched his chin. "Now, there's just the matter of getting outta here in one piece. What do you think?"

I leaned against the wall. "Well, if I had a grenade, we wouldn't be in this predicament right now."

He chuckled then his expression turned excited. "Oh! I got it! I'm going to call Vicky, my bodyguard." He went over to me and got the phone out his pants that I was now wearing, I tensed up as his hands fumbled inside the pocket, his face only a few centimeters away.

"So, why didn't you have your bodyguard with you in the first place?" I asked curiously as he waited for his bodyguard to pick up, Before he could answer my question, he and his bodyguard got to talking.

When he put down his phone, he smiled at me. "He'll be here in a couple of minutes."

I went over to the sink and washed my hands, thinking about how weird this day was.

Worry washed over me as I realized Katrina, her new boyfriend and my date will be probably waiting anxiously for me. Katrina might probably be pacing back and forth with anger on her face.

I snapped out of my thoughts when tiny sprinkles of water hit my face.

I turned to see Virat, whistling innocently.

I scooped a hand full of water and chucked it over at him. It drenched his top.

He gasped and I laughed loudly, he started to approach me but I chucked another one at him.

He removed his shirt and smirked, an evil spark in his eyes. "You're so going to pay for this." My eyes widened and I sprinted towards one of the stalls. I wasn't quick enough though and he got inside with me, locking the stall.

My back hit the stall door with a loud bang as he began to tickle me. I began to laugh hysterically.

He stopped suddenly, laughing and looking right into my eyes. We stayed like that for a moment, gazing at each other and breathing heavily with our bodies pressed close.

And who would've known, in a stuffy bathroom stall...

Virat Vadhera would have locked his lips softly unto mine and kiss me.

After a few seconds, he started tickling me again

"Oh my god! Virat, stop! Virat!" I yelled loudly, banging repeatedly against the door as his hands tickled my body.

"Ehem."

We stopped abruptly as we heard someone coughing loudly outside and ever so slowly, we opened the door of the stall.

Standing outside is Vicky with his eyebrows raised. The opened door of the men's room revealed completely and utterly shocked faces of his fan girls and paparazzi.

As Virat and I walked out, someone screamed...

"Virat Vadhera and a girl, both of 'em along in the bathroom stall!"

And the frenzy began.

Virat quickly led us out of the bathroom as cameras flashed brightly, screaming blasted thunderously and bold questions were being thrown desperately at us.

It was one big giant stampede as we struggled to get out and get pass the outraged crowd.

It didn't help that I was wearing Virat's pants, he had no shirt on and was only in his boxers, my top is all crumpled, his shirt was on the floor and we looked like a mess.

Pictures were being taken and reporters were all saying the same thing.

It was an uproar in the mall. Virat and I had something in that stal...

When we were safely outside of my car with Virat wearing new clothes, he approached to me...

"I'm really, really sorry for all this trouble. I'll find a way to fix it quickly." he mumbled shyly, completely embarrassed and looking down.

I smiled. "I couldn't care less about what people will be saying. I'll be fine. Don't blame yourself..." I said softly.

"I wish I could apologize to you longer but I really have to go..." he said with an apologetic tone.

I nodded in understanding. I had to go too.

"Don't worry about it." I said coolly.

He put out his hand again and gazed into my eyes with that unfamiliar spark.

"It was... fascinating meeting you." He said, smiling warmly.

I took it and smiled back.

"It was the same for me, and more." I replied. We both looked at each other, wanting to say more but a honk was heard behind us.

Vicky ushered him into the car and our hands slipped apart. I stared after the car as it drove away.

~

I got in my car and quickly called Katrina. She began yammering on and on for minutes about me being late until she finally told me they moved to a restaurant when a commotion happened in the mall which made me gulp nervously.

I drove to the restaurant as fast as I can, not wanting them to wait any longer.

As I arrived, Katrina waited by the door tapping her foot impatiently.

"Look who finally decided to show up!" she exclaimed, exasperated.

She looked me up and down in horror. "What happened to you?" she said in surprise.

"It's a long story." I sighed as we entered the restaurant.

"Well, you're no worse than your date."

We turned and approached a large table.

I gasped in surprise.

"Mannu, meet my new boyfriend, Ranbir and meet his friend...

Virat Vadhera."

We stared at each other in surprise.

He smirked and arched his eyebrows.

"Only on the first date and she's already managed to get me out of my pants."


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Firstly, I would like to thank Zainab (beauty14) for this amazing banner and the coolest title for the story! Zainab, you're the most amazing person! I love you! Secondly, my speech 🤣, please pardon me for typos and grammatical erros.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Since you have officially become UK'S most talented writer, I dedicate an award tooo ME!😃...for supporting, blackmailing, threatening, irritating and annoying you to post such fantastic creations!Haha...Sorry, Jen no award for you this year, but try again next time!šŸ˜›

You have no idea how much hardwork I have put into forcing you to post all these amazing os's! Don't think I forgot about the other one though! Still working on that!šŸ˜†
And Jen thanks for mentioning me in your speech!🤣
I love ya too Jen!šŸ¤—
I feel honored Jen that you have given me the credit for thinking of the world's best title! ( NO, I am not being conceited, just felt like saying that because you and I both know how horrible I am with names and titles!šŸ˜‰)
Okay and the banner, Jen! Did you realize or not? I wrote the wrong name in the banner!🤣
I wrote bathroom rush, instead of date rush! Lol...everyone's probably going to be like ab inhe konsa rush tha bathroom mein! Jen, get those dirty-minded thoughts out of your head this instant! Sharam nahi aati tumhe!😃
Okay coming back to the update, now is the time to give my serious analysis on your os and share my honest reviews, so Jen this time I will be serious and share my "serious thoughts'' with u!
In all seriousness,
OH. MY. MERCIFUL. GOD. Seriously, how many pairs of pants does Manvi own? Like the one day she needs them obviously coincidently her sister, who wears a skirt every single day of her life decides to wear pants! Yes, I am very angry, you want to know why!?! Well, I don't have time for your response, so I will answer anyways! I am very pissed off because you made Manvi sound like she is some poor girl who only owns two pairs of pants!🤣
And also you made her sound poor again where she doesn't have fifty dollars to give to Katrina! How does she not have fifty dollars to pay back her sister, yet she is driving a car which runs on gas! And let me remind u gas comes in car through a gas station and at that gas station u have to pay MONEY to get that gas in the car...so what if Manvi ran out of gas and she had to pay for gas, phir kya hota uska? Gas is really expensive, it's like 5 dollars a gallon, bechari Manvi toh bilkul hi gareeb hojaygi!
And then Katrina has so much money that she can buy about a million skirts but Manvi only had two pairs of pants? Jen what kind of injustice is this?😔
Next time Manvi better be super rich, or else... You know what will happen to you! *evil laugh*😈
By the way don't think my serious analysis is done yet, hold on I still have more complaints for u!
How dare you try to embrass Manvi infront of so many people? What would have happened if someone saw her in her undies? Sab kuch satya naas ho jaata phir! And then main tumhe goli maar deti!🤣(Just joking, promise I don't even know how to use a gun, I am a very innocent and angelic person!)
Shukar hain Virat was there, otherwise I have lost all umeed from u Jen! And what was with those crazy girls, why were they ripping Manvi's clothes off when their target was clearly the other one, TEEN SENSATION,VIRAT VADHERA! Hello, do you people not realize the difference between a smoking-hot six pack machine and a beautiful looking skinny WOMAN? Like huge differences between them, I mean the obvious reasons are one wears Sky-blue panties 😳 and the other one wear's checkered boxers😳! Now, do I have to go into more details, or is it clear now?šŸ˜›
AND BIGGEST COMPLAINT-----> MANVI TANDON? 😔
KYA ZAMANNA AGAYA HAIN? WHAT THE HECK IS THIS?😔
I will deal about this matter with you later when I also have the right torture devices with me as well!😈
Looks like someone is getting naughty shaughty!
Obviously, ur not supposed to be looking down at her underwear, sharam nahi hain Virat ko!?!šŸ˜‰
Guessing favorite colors by looking at each other's inners! Good one Jen! What's next, now?😳
And Jen what is with you and this new obsession with no pants? Like first you make Manvi not have any pants and now Virat?
Why don't u make them both naked, so you can fulfill your wish of not letting them both have any clothes!🤣
Chalo atleast you didn't make Virat a creep, thank god Manvi ki izzar bach gayi and he didn't do anything else except a harmless kiss and giving her his pants! BUT WHAT YOU DID DO WRONG WAS THAT YOU LET VIRAT GO IN HIS BOXERS IN FRONT OF SO MANY GIRLS? Uski koi izzat hain ya nahi? Jen civil rights is something right?šŸ˜†
Jen, what dreams were you talking about?ā˜ŗļø
Ahem...Ahem...Please keep those thoughts to yourself and let us mere innocents live our life peacefully!😃
Jen, you made my hot macho-hunk into a tickle minister?
Like first you make him a perve, then an almost-nanga, and now this? Is there any more damage left to be done! And then there's always got to be a kabab mein hadi everywhere right? Vicky ka bacha!
And the end obviously it had to be Virat! Who else could it have been?😃
Loved this part! Haha... on the first meeting she got him out of his pants already, so next meeting mein ab kya boxe... (You can finish the rest of it for me!šŸ˜‰)
He smirked and arched his eyebrows."Only on the first date and she's already managed to get me out of my pants."
Finally done with my long,serious anaylsis!'
Jen if this is not long enough for you then I suggest you just go jump off a cliff or something because at this point this comment is bigger then the actual os itself!šŸ˜†
OH. MY. MERCIFULL. GOD. YOU BETTER POST A SEQUEL AND A PART TWO OF THIS OTHERWISE GET READY FOR THE AVANALNCHE!
Edited by beauty14 - 11 years ago
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res!
unres!

awesome os
loved it
loved the title date rush
virman first meeting is nice
keep writing
thanks for the pm😊
Edited by niki795 - 11 years ago
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Amazing os
Loved it
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aha jinno nice one hanšŸ‘šŸ¼
keep rocking
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it's really nice dear...
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awesome os dear
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That was awesome to read!
Today's been a depressing day, but reading the OS brought a huge smile on my face!
Loved it!
Do pm me if you write anything else :)
Take care,
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wooow it was superbbb
Really enjoyed it alot...
In starting I was lyk ya virat will be her date
But den after so much happened I thought
No now its gonna end how will it be possible
Nd at d end wen katrina said ur date is more den worst lyk dat
Then I was sure its virat!! Nd it happened
Loved it alot! !!!!.. totally enjoyable...
Well written nd I want one more part for dis..
A little romantic 1 atleast dey shud date md more plz...
Plzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wooow it was superbbb
Really enjoyed it alot...
In starting I was lyk ya virat will be her date
But den after so much happened I thought
No now its gonna end how will it be possible
Nd at d end wen katrina said ur date is more den worst lyk dat
Then I was sure its virat!! Nd it happened
Loved it alot! !!!!.. totally enjoyable...
Well written nd I want one more part for dis..
A little romantic 1 atleast dey shud date md more plz...
Plzz. Nd thnx for d pm

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