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LyssaPie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#771

Oh wow what an amazing ending, although I won't deny that i'm sad about this amazing story's coming to an end

Their love for each other has truly grown and no wonder the woman Khushi has become didn't want to be separated from her love, her husband

& Sometimes you think not listening to your parents is right but in his case he should've, He was trying to do the right thing whereas several others were ruining it

Arnav's mother is clever that by seeing what's happening to Pranab they sent him abroad

Can't wait to read the epilogue and see how Arshi are leading their life...

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Fozia

@MsFuzzybear69

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Posted: 11 years ago

#772

A beautiful ending to such an awesome story...

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Summer99

@Summer99

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Posted: 11 years ago

#773

A very good end to a very good story
Happy they didnt get separeted ; )

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

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Posted: 11 years ago

#774

Beautiful update Jenny! Such a great story but I have to say this late spring is my fav!! Very very close to my heart! You must think I am a weirdo but I still think about that story!!!! Die hard Arshi fan! Thanks for the pm.

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kajal511

@kajal511

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Posted: 11 years ago

#775

looking forward for epilogue
cant wait

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pallavi

@palo101

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Posted: 11 years ago

#776

I cant believe this story is going to end... it was very beautifully written like I have mentioned earlier...
A man torn by his morals and sensibilities during the time of the British raj !.. beautiful.. 😃..

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aquagal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#777

The story ended this soon!!!
I'm glad that the "Last time" didn't remain forever. They met again, he seek her out and met her with the help of Hari.
I loved that Khushi was stubborn enough to not let Arnav decide to leave her again. Arnav had no fault, he did no wrong but he still got stuck in to this violence case, one he was against. He can't even fight a case to prove his innocence because at that time law was not that friendly and forgiving for people suspected to be involved in freedom movements.
I'm happy that finally they belong together. The consummation scene reminded me of the one in the show. I must say you wrote it beautifully.
A very nice story. I'll catch on your other stories soon. 😊

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darya20

@darya20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#778

Superb I just read it in one go and really loved it

It was fantastic

But it was incomplete

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Pramiti

@maverickmartin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#779

I'm so sorry! I just haven't been able to comment in a long time, for various reasons.

This is one story that was made to turned into a movie. The scene where Arnav comes back... I could literally hear the soft sound of water lapping against the side of the boat, the glow of the lantern in the darkness, throwing soft light upon the man Khushi has been waiting for with bated breathe. It was the best moment of this story for me. I love how he gradually comes to love her, not just because he is wedded to her, but as a whole person, gives her thoughts and opinions importance. Arnav grows up as she does too.

I love love LOVE the line, "All I will ever need I can see in your eyes". THE best dialogue of this story for me. Oh this is such a lovely story, I don't want it to end! I want to see them flee, dodge the police, find solace in each others arms, I want to see all of it. But alas, as all good things do, this too has to come to an end. *sighs*

P.S. Three Epilogues to this too? Please, please, pretty please! 😆

P.P.S. I actually loved this more than ALS. *sheepish smile*

P.P.P.S. I don't want you to go on a break! *pouts*

Edited by maverickmartin - 11 years ago