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vgedin

@vgedin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#761

Unresed here -

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/94448102

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BubblySanaya

@BubblySanaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#762

I absolutely loved the last part...

I was thinking from the teaser that Arnav will leave and Khushi will go back to the Haveli...

and when i read about the reunion in Banaras that Arnav was talking about, i was confirmed that you are gonna seperate them again...

But lady...you never cease to amaze me... I absolutely loved the twist that came when Arnav found Khushi near the steps...

lovely dialogues too...

they are indeed a made for each other couple... our Arshi... 😃

even i was confused when you mentioned last part... coz u said there will be 2 parts...

thanx for the clarification.. waiting eagerly for the epilogue...

will miss this story a lot Jenny... hope this would keep on goin, and never end...

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#763

Let me take a breath first.

It happens to me always jenny that after reading your update i just can't get out from the trance for a while. And it sure reprimands how magnificent you are!

I'll really miss the story. Your every tale has some kind of visceral attraction that pulls me towards it.

After spending a blissful night with her beloved, how can she let him go. No comfort no nothing can stop her from going with him. the love what she treasured for him since she got married, now came to fulfill. How cum she let it go in the crux of the moment. both knows very well, that in spite of their staying away from each other, their myriad love will remain same, or even will increase more. But khushi just can't take the toll of losing him again.

i'm so happy that finally they are united and decided to face the turbulent life together.

As you ended the story,can we have epilogue of this? Cause ye dil mange more.

thought to share this for your previous chapter, but forgot it. So here is it for you

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sunshineswirl

@sunshineswirl

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#764

I absolutely loved every single part of this fanfiction...it was like reading history with a difference Arnav and Khushi my two most beloved characters of the Indian tele. You are an amazing storyteller and writer.

A heartfelt thank you and looking forward to your future endeavours.

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MamiaRehman

@MamiaRehman

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#765

m completely mesmerized by this last chapter... well nothing new ... it always happen with me whenever i read ur stories ... Jenny ... God really blessed u with awesome talent... 😊

we are very lucky that we got the chance to witness to this awesome creation ... 1 request Jenny plzzz stop writing ...

and his child bride finally has grown up... 😊 in her every reply she clearly showed the power of her love, the strength of her affection ... determination to be with her Arnab at any cost, at any situation ... i could do nothing but admired their whole convo...

BRILLIANT ... 👏👏👏

will be wait for ur new creation ...

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Amanram

@Amanram

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#766

just awesome I totally loved this last chapter and totally with Khushi for not wanting to leave Arnab yet again. Yes that's the Khushi I have been wanting to see - going for what she wants and what is right for them. Can't wait to read the epilogue. I still miss that Pranab did not play a bigger part in the reunion or in helping them - I kind of liked him but we all knew he was totally taken by Khushi and yet he managed to stay within his limits.

Totally totally in love with this SS -

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annys

@annys

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#767

This was really a beautiful journey to that time whole story take us to the ride of the time ...
n i love the Ending ...

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riha5002

@riha5002

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#768

Aww Jenny that was a sweet sweet story, the way you bring out the characters is amazing. I read the whole story in one sitting, I was waiting for you finish it 😉 !! You keep surpassing all the characters before..be it Arnav Singh ..Arnav Foster or now Aranab Mallick and all the different Khushi's OMG you are amazing.

I just have one reqest, please don't ever remove your stories, if you do please make them available on Amazom, I would not mind getting a copy for myself.

Take bow Jenny, love you stories. Please keep amazing us and entertaining us. Thank you.👏

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rati123

@rati123

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#769

Such a beautiful story !! Thanks a lot !

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clarissajohn

@clarissajohn

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#770

Tum aa gaye ho noor aa gaya hai

Nahi to charago se lau ja rahi thi

Jeene ki tumse wajeh mil gayi hai

Badi bewajeh zindagi ja rahi thi

I cant get enough of u jen .. u know what... I love khalid hossenis books even if its kite runner or The thousand splendid suns. After reading them I would be restless for days and thinking of the characters.. and you evoke the same emotion in me in all ur stories,. I I would be restless and with Doll ,, its very special to me . Their love ... this arnab and khushi and even though story was small it is powerful...

I expect an epilogue man

I want you to take writings seriously and be a well known writer

I wish you to excel in writing and publish books .. you have the ablity.. please do something

Din duba nahi rat dubi nahi jane kaisa hai safar

Khwabo ke diye aankho mein liye wahi aa rahe the

Jaha se tumhari sada aa rahi thi

Tum aa gaye ho nur aa gaya hai

Nahi to charago se lau ja rahi thi

Tum aa gaye ho nur aa gaya hai