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Aaradhaya1688

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Posted: 11 years ago

#741

Loved d update
thanks for d pm

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DhivyaMurali

@dhivyamurali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#742

That was a great story Jenny!...thank you so much for all your wonderful FFs.

Love,
Dhiv

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#743

All i can say is thank you for writing this wonderful story.

It has been my absolute pleasure reading it.

Thank you for a wonderful journey.

Was surely one of my favorite story.

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#744

Awesome! Loved how you have handled the delicate transformation of relationship between Arnav and Khushi throughout the story. And best of all, I'm glad Arnav finally agreed to take Khushi with him.

Looking forward to the epilogue...

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musicfan5

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Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#745

Amazing story... Beautifully written... Different setup... Different time era but the same deep love...

I read it all at once just couldn't stop... Beautiful potrayal of characters, their emotions, their thoughts, pain, turmoil...

You have penned the progression of Khushi from a child to a beautiful and strong woman who loves her husband so much beautifully along with the mental and emotional transition in Arnab from viewing Khushi as a child to his beloved Khushu...amazing

Awesome story...loved it

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sincereme

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Posted: 11 years ago

#746

yayy... I m so happy for getting an epilogue...

Eagerly waiting...

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samirao

@samirao

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Posted: 11 years ago

#747

Beautiful and perfect end of the wounderfull story , must say , whole story was written exceptionally well , and thanks a lot for happy ending , eagerly waiting for epilogue and update for intoxication

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Seethu

@Seethu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#748

Although I enjoyed the story I'm more sad about the fact that this is completed ...atleast I'm happy that Arnab did see more than a child in Khushi and Khushi too was persistent about her love towards her husband .. I loved her determination to be with him under any circumstances ...

Wonderful story .. waiting for the epilogue ..

Thank you !!!

PS: I still hope that your break will be temporary !!!