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Posted: 11 years ago
that was such captivating update
the way you described their emotions, their reunion and finally when they become.. it felt so surreal , so intense and passionate.. that I was just lost reading it
so beautifully written
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Very romantic...whenever he called her Khushu...and passionate update...It was totally dedicated to ARSHI...Love you Jenny...thanks for the beautiful update.

Thanks for the PM😛

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow...it .was wonderful...final arnav and khushi met waitn for next part asap

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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update Jenny
Words indeed weren't needed at this moment between them
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pearl_Oyster

Finally...!

My 1st comment on your Ongoing story.. 😊

Read all the 10 chapters and it seems quite challenging to express what I am going through. But here, I'll give a try. 😆

Starting right from Chapter 1..

The background of the story is unique and appeals at once.

I was quite surprised reading Khushi as 12 years old and already married to Arnav.

But as I read further chapters, once again I can't help but admire your innate writing skills.

And then that Pranab guy.. He's really scared me. I thought he might try to...you must have got the line... 😉

but since he didn't do anything yet, I guess he is a nice person.

Scrolling down to Arnav (Arnab I mean) and Khushi, just loved their heart-appealing chemistry.

And the latest chapter just outstanding. Finally the two souls found their union. Really happy for them. ⭐️

Looking forward to read the coming chapter.

Update soon 😊


P.S. One more stalker added to your list 😉




Edited my comment.

and as I am new to stalking, can you just gimme a faint idea as by when you'll be updating the next chap? 😃
Edited by Pearl_Oyster - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
😳 😳 😳...
what an update dear...
one of the best chapter f this amxng story...
lovd it...
lovd it...
lovd it..
plxxx dear continue oon...
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thnxxx a lot 4 pm...
Edited by smartgirl9009 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank you. it was awesome .no words can explain.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such a beautiful update. It was like reading a poem.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely Chapter...finally they came together...years of yearning and waiting finally thrust came together ..I was expecting to see more about pranav in this chapter
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update loved it thank you for pm.

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