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KBS

@oKBSo

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#371

this chapter increased my respect ten folds for u
u write it in nicest way possible

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HugeArshiFan

@HugeArshiFan

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#372

"Do press like if you didn't find this chapter disappointing in any way and try to leave a comment please."

Jenny... don't be overly modest, please.

Love most of your work. Loved this chapter ... and to think 2 chapters ago, I was terrified thinking they would never meet again.

Great Story and wonderfully written.

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Pyewest

@Pyewest

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#373

Thanks for the beautiful story 👏

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Pooja

@poojasidd123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#374

oh wow!! this is exquisitely beautifully written..this chapter just made my day. i loved each n evrything abt it. the emotional reunion amidst the rain,his endearing means of saying her name, his realization of her transformatn into a beautigul young lady, reunion with his faithful hari, hari's effort at making their stay comfortable, the hut, the description of the environ surroundin the hut, the hot boiled rice n hilsa fish cooked in mustard gravy❤️, khushi's shyness n arnav teasing her,the evoking of the first rush of desire for his wife, khushi's natural submitting,their blissful union n finally arnav's concern for her if his innocent wife is hurt... so so good👏 hats off to u for bringing out this beauty.

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#375

Jenny, I was blushing like anything while reading this passionate love story at office and people gave me weird looks..lol! What shoudl I say? the raw desire, the freshness and fondness of love and passion..heady combination...I was all drooling...still blushing..

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kajal511

@kajal511

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#376

awesome update
really happy finally they become one...little sad becoz this FF is soon coming to its final destination...but happy for arshi

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ipktouch

@ipktouch

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#377

superb and amazing update dear...finally our kushi became a woman of all needs within her for hubby arnab...and arnab realizing her physical changes showed his desire well mixed with love for his wifey...both are made for each other and nice thing they have consummated that showed their longing for each other...waiting eagerly for the next update...

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#378

Jen, it was superb!!! 🥳

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MBb_OrHGB38[/YOUTUBE]

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#379

and cliched but couldn't help it!

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OdBvP3MosCQ[/YOUTUBE]

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Afsha Ismail

@Chamkili06

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#380

OH MY GODDD...
THEEEY CONSUMMAAATEDDD
HE KISSSEDD HRRR
EEE
I CNT TK ALL DIS DAMMMIT..
AND JENNY THIS WS CLEAAAN SO NO WORRRIESS..
AS ALWAYS BEAAAUTIFULLY WRITTTEENN..
AND SECND LAST CHPTR...NTTT FAAAIIIRRR :(