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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful chapter as always.
I would have loved to see some more detailing on their reactions after watching each other after two years...specially arnab's...it was him who was watching his child bride as a woman so a little insight to his heart detailing on it would be more of my likings.
The union reminded me of the hut scene...superb.
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Posted: 11 years ago
but he will leave her and go after tis??? what will happen to her if she become pregnant??? what will she say to arnab family?? as they don't know about their meeting???
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Posted: 11 years ago
Absolutely loved it... the consummation was beautiful and perfectly written 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was awsumm chapter finallt he come back to her...
khushii belive him 😊it was beautifully written
thanks for om
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Posted: 11 years ago
can't believe you are ending it so soon 😭
but I understand..you may want to start a new one.
Thankyou for PM😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful ...at last they are united...hopefully for good...loved it ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
I always felt that the hut scene in the show was somehow lacking, forced and left me unsatisfied. You took that setting and made something wonderful happen. Then you add Hari's devotion to his choto babu to remind us of what Arnab left behind in his exile and a glimpse off how alone he has been in the last 2 years.
The darkness of the night laced with moonlight in the humble little hut, they finally come together after two years...could you make it any more emotional? Their love for each other so evident, their hunger, concern and his tenderness for her exactly what I would expect from these two souls. I felt at Arnav's wait for her to grow up was so worth it.

For me the best part was her absolute conviction of his innocence and knowledge that he will not break his promise. I have this feeling that Prabodh, his brother had something to do with Arnab being wrongly accused.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya

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It felt surreal and ethereal reading that scene. Indeed coming together of Arnav and Khushi. She is all woman now and a a wet woman at that. He is seeing her after a gap of two years and we all know distance makes the heart grow fonder and it impossible to keep your hands to yourself anymore.

Khushi and 'Shy'? I loved that line. Always did and always will. A woman who is courageous somehow is always disassociated with the emotion of shyness. It is an endearing combination. Spirited, courageous yet shy. immensely appealing to the man.

Despite the forced nature of that scene on the show, I loved it. Here on the other hand Jen Jen, it was the most beautiful scene that you could have etched. So natural and so real. The food, the clothes, the way she tied the sari over one shoulder, beautiful.

It was Arnav Khushi consummation scene. It was Shakuntala Dushyant Consummation scene. They merged blended and emerged as a classical piece making it uniquely yours.

Loved it Jen.

P.S - I couldn't decide for a minute whether I loved the hilsa and rice more or the consummation and finally I decided it was the scene🤣 The thing is, I haven't had Hilsa fish with the mustard gravy for more than 5 years. A friend of mine used to feed me that regularly those days. So you can imagine how its absence has made my heart grow fonder😆

On a serious note...this consummation scene beats the food coz it is special. very special.😳


Loved your comment as usual, dear..😊
I have never eaten Hilsa fish and rice but it sounds delicious and a part of me was sad at them getting busy with other things and letting their nice, warm dinner get cold!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
sometimes words won't do justice ...that just thank u ..for this amazing update ...a tight hug for u my friend...
i was really waiting for this update ...and the wait was worth...
after separation we know that Arshi were desperate to be together...
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally they r together after such a long wait

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