Arnav Singh Raizada's musings #2 -Part 12 Page 73 - Page 55

This time it's eccentricaji. No doubt her stories are awesome with a touch of real life, that's the best part I love about her stories.

I love her hilarious rom-com short story "Opposite do not attract", love the way she showed naughty Raizada turning tables in his favors to make khushi his wife. It's hilarious and jolly story.

The way she closed the loop of 300 RS was hot and superb. ☺️

Lavanyah was a gem sister of crazy Khushi in Much Ado about nothing.

I like a lot that you used eccentrica idea to write this update as Arnav POV and Arnav's points for defining Akash.

Waiting for the next musing eagerly.

Nobody deserves it more than her for her superb writing.

She writes emotion, passion and sad stories as well as humour.

She is not only a very good writer, but is a wonderful person too.

I love her fetidh for Madhuri.

And her crazy Khushi made me laugh like crazy.

Thanks Gita, for writing a musing on her.

She truly deserves it.

And I'm glad to see you back on the writing table.

Mamaji and his antics had me in splits.

Thanks for making the Invisible Mamaji the Hero here.

And Chaitu, you promised to start a new story in January this year.

I do hope you remember that.

I laughed loads... 😆

And you did complete justice in describing Chaitu's way of writing (Maine 'comestible' notice kiya 😉)

Now to Chaitu... Since you have spoken about her OSes and SSes, I will speak about her FFs.

She has written one of the best works on ArHi on the Forum and that happens to be Love Life and Labyrinth. Oh the detailing of the plot and the layering of the character! You are kept at the edge of your seats and dancing on your toes! You hate the villains with a vengeance and love ArHi manifold! You applaud the bad for its finesse, you pray for the good for its deliverance... This is a story that gives you romance but gives you plot lines to wonder and think and guess... An intelligent tale. Bas! 👍🏼

The second one is It Was Meant To Be Eventually. This one chronicles the journey of Arnav and Khushi from the time they are children to the point they have their own child. Such a story was a dream come true for a sucker of childhood and teenage ArHi stories like me. Again, the villain is someone you would reckon. MUs that kill and friendship that unites. Beautiful is the word. Bas!

mem1 thanks for the musing and v.s thanks for letting me know 😊

PS: Chaitu I am glad that I have read your brilliant work, that I have met you in real and that I can call you a friend too 🤗

PPS: Banners baoo pretty che 😃

Edited:

My reply to Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada:⭐️

Arnav: The whole house was in a frenzy with floral decorations and fairy lights strung everywhere , tables weighed down by tons of cholesterol-loaded comestibles, and the whole family at their eccentric best!

Me: I knew you were a fast learner, but to emulate me, and to this perfection; I must say that your diligence is nothing if not flattering👏

Arnav: Di wanted me to perlustrate (survey) the arrangements and tell her what I thought, but I didn't want to tell her that one look at my dressed-to-kill wife and I was stuck on the lust part of perlustrate!

Me: You are on the right path; perlustrate never was supposed to be taken for survey. I hope you worked on converting your thoughts to action right away.😳

Arnav: So when Mami called to inform us that they were five minutes from home, the foyer was suddenly transformed into a set out of one of those annoying movies Khushi loves so much. Di leading the way with an aarti thaal , flanked on either side (a little behind her, in keeping with the dutiful bahu image) were Khushi and Payal. Nani stood to the side, like the matriarch of a royal family, overlooking the proceedings.

Me: And here I was transformed back to ODNA. Come to think of it, the real Raizada family isn't very different from the one in the short story. What say?😉

Arnav: My mamaji, the almost invisible and the only non-eccentric (until now) member of the Raizada clan was dressed to put Raj Kapoor (of Mera Naam Joker fame ) to shame

Me: Now what has happened to poor Mamaji? I was expecting a Mr. India, but received a Mera naam joker', instead. Is it safe to say that Mamaji is in seventh heaven?😆

Arnav: A squeal, a whoop and a guffaw (all in my head) later I gave him a most dignified hug and expressed my pleasure on his return.

Me: Now, now; if only the Khushi of MAAD might have read this...she would have jumped straight in to the lap of Arnav So many words for one reaction Raizada😉

Arnav: He looked to the left, then to the right and then to the left again, and I almost braced myself for the oncoming traffic, when he knelt down in front of me and asked me if he could talk about something confidential.

Me: 🤣 This Akash is the best!

Arnav: I am at the top of the totem pole

Me: @bold: Now that's new for me...😲

Arnav: But I shushed her, and as soon as we were in the room, I locked the door and got under the covers with her. Finally after almost two years, I got to do what I had very badly wanted to do on that fateful New year's eve at Buaji's house. Actually more than what I had wanted back then...(way more...but then, she is my wife now! It is legal!)

Me: Yeh hui na baat! (It does not always have to be archaic English, okay!)😛

Arnav: He still had his secretary (no, don't get ideas, his secretary is an old man)

Me: And I'm absolutely sure someone else must have appointed him.😆

Arnav: Turns out the writer he read the most was someone who called herself Eccentrica ... Where do they come up with these names anyway!

Me: Eccentric names for eccentric people. Besides, not everyone can have a sexy name and abbreviation (I expect you to blush over here)

Arnav: (Does she even have a day job?)

Me: The answer is no. I find as much time to write as you do under the sheets with Khushi. (I leave the estimation to you)☺️

Arnav: I was alive and well by doing things that a ghost could certainly not do.

Me: You gutter you!☺️ ☺️

Arnav: We did some research (read some more comments) and figured out that mamaji was actually spamming (posting annoying comments bugging the writer for updates) and this is a crime in the IF world. So his account was actually banned. We found our way to a complaints thread where we found Mamaji and his bunch of virtual friends protesting rather vehemently about this ban and debating on what constitutes spam and other such earth shattering issues.

Me: You don't know how happy I am to have read that. Not because you raised the issue (and proved as to how much our thoughts match) but because you emboldened him as well. Kudos to you, Mamaji!👍🏼

Arnav: (Can it get more humiliating?? )

Me: Hey! You cannot park your helicopter in the crowded seats of Pune.😛 Besides, I already know you enjoyed it

Arnav: (Will she ever quit using Ji for every Tom, Dick and Harry, or should I say TomJi, DickJi and HarryJi)

Me: I don't think so, but you can always try.🐷

Arnav: And then Khushi did something she had never done before, something that turned me into ArnavShocked to the core Raizada followed by Arnav Sinfully Seduced Raizada... She stopped my gloating with the most x-rated kiss I had ever experienced.

Me: And all Arshians rejoiced❤️

P.S. I shall be waiting for the thank you note. I consider your thoughts akin to an avowal and blatant disregard of them is something I know wouldn't go with your image😆

Thank you so much Gita, for including a musing with me as the muse (oh how I love to put it in that way). The beginning was resemblant of the way I write, so much so that I was confounded for a moment. I must tell you that it was only Mamaji's entry that brought me out of the ASR's vocal induced reverie. I am indeed happy to know that you wrote this one with Mamaji as an integral character (and thus reversing the embarrassment heaped upon him in ODNA)

P.P.S. Perlustrate continues to be one of my favorite words.😳

While I have been absconding

But before you go accusing

Me of just snoozing

I need to do some explaining

Alas, It was not of my choosing

So please to be excusing

However now it's all confusing

So I had first better do some perusing

Of all the things happening

With and without showering 😳

Time to sneak under the covers

A kind hearted , generous , immensely witty , who has her heart n mind at right places... Her writing is undoubtedly exemplary , along with that she is a sweetheart... Bas!!

i have found in her a very good frnd wid whom u can discuss n share anything n everything under the sky n on the earth... Also, she is so so very prompt in helping people... I can vouch for it cuz i ve experienced it myself countless times...

Love you Chaitu for being just the way you are!! 🤗

She is a [C]HARMING gal with an extremely

. . [ H]UMBLE nature , very [A]FFABLE and

[I]NTELLIGENT who has got [T]ALENT flowing in her blood [U]BERLY... ❤️.