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prati_incept

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Posted: 11 years ago

#521

wow!! this was one funny musing

aloo wale Chip

Preeto having more babies

heard her trying to talk and it is scary

lapping them up like a hungry puppy

calling one of her babies Mintu in her honor

fresh as 23 mints

prolonged distraction session

😆 😆 😆

.. and so on...

im going to save these lines for reference.. o remind myself how you brought smile on my face.. irrespective of few real life tensions..

Thank you Gita 🤗

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prati_incept

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Posted: 11 years ago

#522

I dont remember what I commented on earlier musings..

so do not mind if im repeating myself..

but i cant help saying it..

you are awesome writer..⭐️

this is very very original and unique way of story telling.. ⭐️⭐️

i had read some of the stories from writers u write about and totally related to the musing

also i had not read others and still felt the connection..

how do you do that?

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prati_incept

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Posted: 11 years ago

#523

I didnt read Mints' stories yet.. and not that you intrigued..

got to read them n im going to start with 'Didi ki Saut' 😉

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prati_incept

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Posted: 11 years ago

#524

i hope this is not 'spamming'

Im just writing as im thinking..

ok this is last1

have you seen the movie 'Inception' Gita?

dream within a dream

just like the Musing.. fiction within a fiction..

you indeed created that illusion n made me take it as real..

am i making any sense?

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Uthra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#525

Originally posted by: prati_incept

i hope this is not 'spamming'

Im just writing as im thinking..

ok this is last1

have you seen the movie 'Inception' Gita?
dream within a dream

just like the Musing.. fiction within a fiction..
you indeed created that illusion n made me take it as real..

am i making any sense?

Prati, are you very busy, you may want to read the interlude I wrote for musings sometime back. Link is in my index given in my siggy.

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mem1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#526

Originally posted by: prati_incept

i hope this is not 'spamming'

Im just writing as im thinking..

ok this is last1

have you seen the movie 'Inception' Gita?
dream within a dream

just like the Musing.. fiction within a fiction..
you indeed created that illusion n made me take it as real..

am i making any sense?

Thank you so much for your super sweet comments, darling...

and Viji is right... you should read the interlude she wrote... your comment is completely in sync with what she wrote!

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ZAIDI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#527

dohh ...

i thought yu updated n i came fr frst place 😳

p.s... feel free to delete ths cmnt agr ye spam cnsdr hota hai tou

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awroneema

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Posted: 11 years ago

#528

mem1 or should i say mami ji...just one word for u...

I.N.C.R.E.D.I.B.L.E

👏 👏 👏

please keep musing...

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mem1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#529

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
The Author of this post have chosen to restrict the content of this Post to members only.

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#530

I loved it...I recently read an OS by Eccentrica and loved it, I was floored and completely in awe of her brilliance...I sounded like a blabbering fan girl ...I am so glad that ASR broke his silence by musing on her, so deserving and you did a superb job...I am surprised you doubted your writing...I definitely need to read the rest of Eccentrica's writing ...

I will be back with more...

And I do remember her diligently commenting on every musing and remembering scrapping her about the same...

And I am not your OAOF but the OWLYTM...😉

Okay so I am back after reading some of her stories and I have to tell you G, you are a genius, really.

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The way you have used her style, picked up from her story, the references, her humour and her brilliance and turned into a musing which reflected her completely and also totally proved why she was such a great choice for a musing.

Right from the points format to the coloured text in the bracket that you were remarkable and spot on.

The way you included the mostly invisible Mr India competition Mamaji and the subtle references from ODNA where Shashi is actually worried about his participation it was hysterical.

G you are like wet clay that moulds itself into any formation, and you do that each time brilliantly while maintaining your style of humour and wit, which leaves me awe struck and a fan.

I am confused who to write about here in my comment the Muser or her Musee, both outstanding.

I love your humour the way you spoke and describe the new and improved mama ji and the way they draw their conclusions and go to fetch mama ji and his colourful crazy clothes and confidence wondering if he is having an affair...ha ha.

<div>Loved how ASR says he finally gets Khushi under the covers and is able to do what he wanted that New Years night...it's not always what you say but also the way you do, subtle but touching the right cords making it funny,brilliant and witty .

Love the description and idea of the clandestine meeting on the terrace and the way you talked about the terrace door being locked ...ha ha people do have a bad habit if barging in at the most annoying and untimely moments causing unnecessary MUs...so this was clever.

I so completely could visualise this Akash matched his description, payal too! The entire update and the way the scenes played out!

The bit about doing more research translating into reading more comments and the spamming which leads us to the complaints thread...ha ha

The bit about Shyam and taking out the Kumari from her name to ASR asking Khushi if she harboured fantasies of him removing the Kumari from her name ( love the pun) to her response saying she wanted nothing of the sort but yes wanted to change his and add Laad Governor to it...

The characteristics of all the characters main and not so main, have been incredible and with a purpose and justified their presence and role.

You know each line is so amazingly written I could go on but this is meant to be a comment not a thesis, ( I could write one on your works too ).

So am ending this her, hopefully you have understood in all of my over enthusiastic and excited blabber how much I have enjoyed this update and both yours and Chaitalee ( if you are reading ) your writing and your stories.

And now start the countdown, threats, emotional blackmail to the next musing...am excited...

Edited by vandana.sagar - 11 years ago