Arnav Singh Raizada's musings #2 -Part 12 Page 73 - Page 54

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I love the way Eccentrica writes...it just feels so real...like i am watching them happening before my eyes...Opposites do not attract. is her first story i have read...i remember, it was during my professional exam, and waited for the updates, knowing that it would remove my whole days tiredness in a minute... and it really did...with each update...
then i read her "Bidding adieu"...God, i cried like anything...it amazed me how someone who wrote Opposites do not attract can write something like Bidding adieu...
much later i went through her whole index...and really each of them and worth spending sleepless nights...
special mention to her "It's meant to be...eventually" and "Much ado about nothing"...just loved this two...they are amazing...


now back to you, meri pyaari si Gita...i am so glad u are back, missed you dammit...

it's good to get glimpse of the way Arnav-Khushi's life is going...what Arnav ji is doing 😉 with his wife...what he thinks of Akash...how mamaji is...and most of all seeing Arnav Ji musing...

Edited by nishu_shorna - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
M! 😃

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OMG Gita!! This was one hilarious musing... The whole description of the homecoming of Mamaji was funny... the detailing of the family's excitement, the sheer shock of seeing a outwardly transformed Mamaji and then their deducing that black magic had been done on their beloved Mama... was total laugh out loud. 😆

Loved Arnav's thoughts about this whole episode... especially about Mama finding back his spine!! Loved their secret meeting on the terrace and the way Payal sneaked in on Mamaji to find what he was exactly upto. Mr. India!! Lolzz... Watte brilliant idea Mamaji! And so the younger lot went back to their respective rooms to read Eccentrica! 😳

Well I must admit, that I have missed out on reading her wonderful stories so far. Infact Vandy had suggested one of her OS's a few weeks ago, and due to AD I missed out on reading that too... I wish I had, so I could at least say something about her brilliant writing... Will definitely get onto it soon! 😃

Loved how you have covered the various stories of Eccentrica seamlessly, into this very amusing musing... As always, you are spot on with your observations and hats off to you for putting in so much effort to read various writers and muse on them Gita!! Your style of writing is just brilliant... 👏

Do keep up with these...

Edited by mints23 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its Chaitalee.
What can I say? What can I possibly say that would do justice to the amazing writer that she is. Having said that, I have known her only recently and I am a phangirl of "Love, Life, Labyrinth" and I am yet to read her other stories. So I am off to read her other stories so that I can understand what is written here. But I thoroughly enjoyed your musing. There is no doubt that you are an amazing writer Gita. But the beauty lies in your capability to hold interest even if one hasn't really read the work of the writer, but would make them want to read them.
"The whole house was in a frenzy with floral decorations and fairy lights strung everywhere , tables weighed down by tons of cholesterol-loaded comestibles, and the whole family at their eccentric best! "
That said it, that writer is eccentrica.
If "Mami wanted to be the only one at the airport when he arrived and we all agreed, some (read Khushi and Aakash) thinking that it was sweet of her to want some alone time with her husband, while others (read me) rather glad to avoid that car ride with mami. ", cracked me up,
then
"Khushi immediately went into her you can stuff a rasgulla in my mouth mode and her eyes looked like they would pop right out of her sockets any second. Payal might have appeared her usual calm self to the unfamiliar observer but my astute eyes caught the battle between extreme shock and self-control raging in side her. She looked upwards with a silent 'God, please give me the strength to not laugh out loud" prayer on her lips" sent me with ROFL, literally.
"But I shushed her, and as soon as we were in the room, I locked the door and got under the covers with her. Finally after almost two years, I got to do what I had very badly wanted to do on that fateful New year's eve at Buaji's house. Actually more than what I had wanted back then...( way more...but then, she is my wife now! It is legal!)"
See, this is what I told, when you invade ASR's mind, you keep in mind to save Khushi's honor and stop right after they got under the covers.
"Mamaji's id was Mr _India and his DP was an old picture of Anil Kapoor. Khushi and Payal seemed to get the joke (it was a mystery to me) and were trying not to giggle."
That's what he wants to be in his wife's presence?
And now comes the testimony to your crazy but very intelligent mind.
"And then Khushi did something she had never done before, something that turned me into Arnav Shocked to the core Raizada followed by Arnav Sinfully Seduced Raizada... She stopped my gloating with the most x-rated kiss I had ever experienced"
G, I am repeating the line, if I remember correctly, you wrote for the interlude. But that's exactly what I feel right now. Modesty can GTH.
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Ok, you can see, i want to write a comment for each one of your lines, cause everything was funny. but that might get to be a boring comment.
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Gita, I don't have to get ideas about your mental state. I know it thoroughly. After all, Drs. Chitra and Vandana are my brain children.
Talking about mind and psyche, I would like to bring to the notice of musings wasis that Chaitalee aka eccentrica is known for her OCD. In fact I call her OCDC, short for OCD Chaitu. She updates exactly once in every four days. So that has always made me a very pathetic reader, because mostly I would be the only one who wouldn't have unresed. She used to tame me for my laziness just by being regular.
And she is extremely talented in characterization and convincingly brings out non-IPKKND characters in her IPK stories. I bet you will fall in love with the antagonists of LLL, Rudra Chaturvedi and Dushyant Dharmadikari, they are irresistible. Saiyyu, you are a saint, I am not talking about you.
Thank you G, for writing this.
P.S: Awesome banner Minty. Don't you dare tell anything about my Minty and her awesomeness. You don't have any right. 🤗
Edited by Viji79 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Me here too in anticipation...
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This thread demands some rhyming,
In response to a musing,
But for the time being,
The grey cells are sleeping,
So have to resort to prose,
To celebrate this musings' dose.

Mamaji ke darshan hue naye avatar mein...Dhanya Bhaag hamare.
Mami another brilliant musing. Loved it.

The moment I read the word 'perlustrate' I thought of Eccentrica. I have read some of her stories and enjoyed them thoroughly.

Although, I must confess that I had to run to the dictionary or googleji to find out the meaning of some words. Haven't yet read all her works so planning to do it in the near future.


Edited by msmarple - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was a great Musing Gita di!👏

Dedicated to Chaitu di aka Eccentrica! She is one of my favourites too!

And you did wonderfully well in getting all the points so well!

The highlighting she had used in much ado about nothing, and the lines that were in it and finally the very-Visible Mamaji! I couldn't stop myself from Laughing at his plight! 🤣

Mamaji, who finally gets himself totally revamped in the modern avatar, did get noticed, so much that each eccentric member of the family got into investigating his behaviour! 😉

I've read her SS's, OS's, FF: IMTBE and presently Love~Life~Labyrinth, and she has proved her brilliance in both, often left me stumped. Totally diverse she is, from Rofling to lietrally leaving you in tears!👏

her vocab, as you've noticed well, is great too, and she is a very amiable person!🤗

i sound like a typical phangirl, but that's what she renders me to be.

She writes with soul,
she writes with a goal,
she writes with life,
she writes till words don't suffice,
she writes with flare,
she writes as a player,
she writes with brain.
She writes with heart.
Humour, pain, passion, loss, thrill, she has got it all..
"Eccentrica" is worth being ASR's muse afterall 😃


Gita di, a wonderful job!👍🏼 when ASR muses, its always a fun ride. :)
Edited by aashi12 - 11 years ago
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Sorryyy for such a late comment geeta!!!
Ahh after long i had my dose of laughter geeta! Please you are not mamaji whose absence his not missed! You are our whose's absence is deeply felt!
God poor mamaji! What all he had to do to get his family's attention n god he did manage to gain that!
There were some one liners that simply had me in splits! As usual a wonderful piece geeta!
N you chose a very eccentric writer this time! When i first time read her works that is opposites do not attract , it had me in splits! One of the most enjoyable n entertaining short stories on this forum!
N then few weeks later i read its meant to be eventually! And i read around 78 chapters in one go! Took me a day or two to finish them! N i was floored by her langauge! Her vocabulary is so extensive, her style of writing so exquisite! The story itself was so beautiful where she has trace khushi n arnav's child where they are childood sweethearts! I mean from their friendship in school to falling in love in college to their love story taking a new turn wen they chose their careers!
The best part of the story was how shyam never succeeded in his evil plans to sepArate arnav n khushi!!
Now i guess its time for me to go n read much ado about nothing!!!
Loved your works eccentric! I wish i could have vacab as brilliant as yours!!!
N mami you better keep musing! Aise gayab mat ho jaya karo!
Edited by Nandz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chaits!

Welcome back G. oh how much I miss your musings or I should say Arnav's musings;)

chaitu k baare mein KBA. wo toh bhool bhi gyi hai k Avs naam ki uski ek IF friend thi. dil k armaan aansuon mein beh gye. hum to tanha hi reh gye na *blows nose* *wipes tears*sniffs*
she is a fabulous writer. mene ODNA pada hai and I laughed at my hearts content at anjali's drama and Mamaji ka ho kar bhi na hona.
I had read MAAN and arnav in that took my breath away and she kept me on toes just for a ArHi kiss. not to forget only THREE seconds ka ArHi kiss. 😡
I had read Kissa 300 rs ka and What's cooking and I was so charged up . ofcourse you know why*blush*

I had read when a heart beats and Many a Moon Ago and I was overwhelmed with emotions.
baki jo I hadn't read. I will read them soonish.

she is a beautiful person inside out and no wonder ASR is musing about her.
meri achi dost hai. par aajkal mujse baat nahi karti. (here comes the tears) *sniffs*

you very well copied her style G but then aren't you a pro??
keep writing Chaits
and keep musing ASR.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Naam hai uska chaitalee
She is sweeter than jalibee
Her mind works intelligently
No one can beat her vocabulary
She's the epitome of versatility
On one hand she'll depict emotions beautifully
Sometimes she'll portray scenarios tragically
And yes she also writes those love scenes sexily
And make even me blush red shyly
She handles situations tactfully
She does everything (writing, commenting etc.)on time responsibly
And I can't wait for her becoming my devrani. ( kidding😉)


thank you sooo much Mami for fulfilling this wish. Humour galore, sexiness personified ASR , aur kya chahiya ?



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

I loved it...I recently read an OS by Eccentrica and loved it, I was floored and completely in awe of her brilliance...I sounded like a blabbering fan girl ...I am so glad that ASR broke his silence by musing on her, so deserving and you did a superb job...I am surprised you doubted your writing...I definitely need to read the rest of Eccentrica's writing ...

I will be back with more...

And I do remember her diligently commenting on every musing and remembering scrapping her about the same...


And I am not your OAOF but the OWLYTM...😉




Yeh OAOF & OWLYTM kya hai????????

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