Arjun SS : *Anmol Bandhan* Last part on Pg 14

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laila

@laila1994

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

It was awesome 👏
I think payal doesn't take drugs.she just fake it so that she can embarrasse her father 😕
loved the update
cont soon

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-Carrie-

@-Carrie-

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

A lovely start to the story😳

I didnt know how much I was missing Rowdy Rathore till I read this line:

"Mujhe dhamki mat do ... aur waise bhi mai kisi ameer baap ki bigdi huyi kanoon todne wali beti ki is faltu dhamkiyon se darne walo mein se nahi hoon...Samjhi?"

Fabulously written line.the very essence of his character is evident in it.Bravo👏

Nahi... Mai nahi chahti ki Dada ki reputation par koi aanch aaye... aap wohi kijiye jo aap dusre logo ke saath karte hain...agar mai Dada ke naam k peechhe chhupke is case se bachne ki koshish karti hoon ...to ye mere Dada ki insult hogi... aur mai aisa kabhi nahi chahungi... mai har saza k liye taiyar hoon...

Wohi toh mai sochun! Arjun ki behen itni insensitive kaise ho sakti hai😕 Atta girlAtleast Bhai ka maan rakhne ka sochti toh hai.It will pain him when he sees the condition of his beloved sister.And he is going to blame himself for the mess she is in😭

Loved it!

pls update soon!

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Anny90

@Anny90

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

interesting update...but plz thodi lammbi update karna next part mein..thanks for the update..😊

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

nice looking forward to it..

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904129

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Awsuum Cs n Chapter 1 diduz..!!! Lovd it!!! Luv Payal's concern fr her Arjun Dada..nd lovd Sam-Payal scenes as well...Thanxx fr pm..Continuee Soonn!

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Hi di...

Thank u for adding me to your buddy list...😊😊😊

And sorry for late comment...

Rathod is really sweet...

Loved the bond between bro n sis...

Payal is so cute...

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...😊😊

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

@Meself

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Okay a question has popped up in my head! Why is it that both my by dido's are so meherbaan on Payal?? I'm not jealous if that's what you're gonna imply but...you...know...it's just that Zuby di writes an OS you, Bhavan di write a complete SS. Kuch toh choot raha hai!! You know main hawa nahi ho gayi!!

And an awesome story! Totally seeti maar! Ab jahan Arjun, Sameer aur Aayesha ho waha aag toh lagni hi hai! I loved it completely. And yeah!! You picked Sukirti as Payal! I've always liked her since Jersy No. 10 days! Oh I cannot wait for the next part!!

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Vishal sharma

@My_loveis_gone

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Amazing dear. Pw me when u update

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Sorry for commenting so lately.
It was way too much superb,just Bhavna style... ;)
loved Payal's concern for her brother.
She respects him too much and loves him...
She doesnt want her Arjun dada's name to be tarnished because of her.
Loved how Bhai made him understand... Just loved it...
Continue soonish...