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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#101

u r really a good writer dear!

dont ever underestimate your skills!

this short story had what u wanted to portray, and i believe, editing is the most difficult task! :)

look forward to read more from u!

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#102

The title of this story...is just beautiful...l like your beautiful writing...

Such amazing talent...read the last chapter again and again...A big thx to Del from my side...

I loved how you penned everyone's thought process and entwined it into every situation...his Mother's words simply stand out to me...everything happens in the time meant to be...

Awesome..Dear..hope you feel inspired to write more and explore your talent further...

Thx..for this beautiful Arhi...story!

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Simran

@dmg123

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Wow!

This was a very amazing story!!

It was extremely well written! I liked all othe POV's of all the characters!

Great job!

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sam_93

@sam_93

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

this piece of writing is beautiful!!! can't wait to read your other works!

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Sorry I could not comment before...I am on holidays ...I got time today to read...I must say for your first story you wrote it beautifully...I liked the way you finished it...no confession...just epilogue of their life...

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Shraya Biswas

@ShrayaBiswas

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Awesome piece of writing..! Loved everything about it! Specially the different perspectives you gave of different characters! Often, while reading a story, we couldn't comprehend what the other characters actually think...it wasn't a problem here! Good job! :)
would be looking forward for more stories from you! :)

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Nidhi Nevatia

@NidhiNev

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: -Delilah-
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The dynamics of Arnav and Khushi's relationship is changing as surely as the seasons are. I love the way Arnav refers to Khushi as 'his Khushi' in his head. And the very fact that they can sit together in companionable silence tells us that their relationship has reached a level many can only hope to witness for themselves one day. It's the mundane details which make this tale so extraordinary. It's as if the story has a heart of its own and it beats in sync with the one in my chest.

Arnav never thinks about chasing after Khushi. He just wants to meet the Khushi he knew. If that isn't divine love I don't know what is. Even Khushi's father can see it. There is a serenity...a soothing factor which your words always bring in.

I really want to know what Arnav said to Khushi exactly because it seems to have breathed life into her.

Enthralling. Stunning. Oh, this is myfavouritechapter...yet!

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zdc3RdXoFwA[/YOUTUBE]

I totally agree with you. I've read the previous parts too which were heart wrenching. But this chapter is so beautifully written. A Friend In Need Is A Friend In Deed... This chapter truly signifyies the phrase.
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