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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Love the update😳
Like Anjali and Arnav's mother POV.
Khushi like arnav but she wasn't in love but she fell in love with arnav during two years and she trusted arnav to belief in life and it's pleasures.
Wow the way you framed arnav being in love and feeling happiness and content with Khushi was beautiful.
My favourite line of this update is
"waqt se pehle or kismet se zyaada kuch nahi milta"
Beautiful quote.
Love the ending, time gap of eight years. Arnav is still filled with unbound love for Khushi and his life is complete because Khushi made it nearly perfect bestowing him the joy of father and all the happiness she could give him.
Awesome story.
Edited by Javeria3991 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
So finally two people who were always meant to be together, came together.
It took them a little time but what's amazing is that they didn't get lost in between.
Arnav made sure of that.

Lovely story with all the right emotions which you wrote beautifully.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Hey...it's a beautiful story dear...Totally enjoyed reading it...U r an awesome writer and I would love to read more of ur work...Thanks for this lovely update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Beautiful ending to this lovely story.
Loved how Arnav brought back the smile on the face of his happiness.
His realization that he loved her was sweet.
Its funny how his family realised he loved Khushi before he did.
Loved how you linked the different events of their lives to the seasons.

Hope you will write something more soon.
Do PM me when you do so.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Arnav Singh Raizada's resplendent journey towards love was stunning and what made it so was your writing without doubt.

I understand what you mean about analytical writing versus fictional writing. They are varied. But to me it is your analytical writing that lent this story a magical and sublime quality. There was dreaminess about the whole thing. Beautiful.

Coming to the story...

So Arnav was always in love but didn't express it in time. So Khushi married someone else.

See there is a million dollar question that always nags me...

When a guy and girl are friends, the guy loves the girl or vice-versa, can the other not feel it? Now that is something I find it hard to accept.

But you are right. That is Khushi's story. But if Khushi comes back and tells me that she did not love Arnav and she loved him only as a friend all those years, that I'll find it difficult to accept.

What I can accept though is that, the guy you are in love with continues to play only the friendship card and you move on thinking your love is never going to be reciprocated...am not sure whether I'm making any sense here M...

But what I want to conclude with is that your writing is magical.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

I had forgotten I had reserved!😆
Edited by -Delilah- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: -Delilah-

Dear Manreet,

No one has ever dedicated anything to me. Ever. (Unless you count Plain White T's song Hey there Delilah, but I guess it wasn't really for me!😆)

Thank you! This one is for you. :')



To Love Again


Love will dissolve the ache of your soul
and fill every hollowness again.

Love will be warm and honest like a friend's hug
and it will teach you how to breathe again.

Love will be the fulfilment of every promise
and it will bring hope with every dawn again.

Love will be infinitely patient like a father's voice
and it will sooth you like a mother's lullaby again.

Love will be grand like the bigger picture
but it will give intimate secrets like a lover's whisper again.

Love will give you eternities
and you will show you how to live in every moment again.

Love will be gentle like an oceans kiss
and it will slowly wash away your pretenses again.

Love will be a fearless like a warrior
and it will teach you to keep your head high again.

Love will make you forget the pain
and give you memories to remember again.

Love will find you because it's a matter of time
Until we meet again...

You really are an incredible talent and a fantastic person Delilah, please don't ever doubt that or let any insolent soul tell you otherwise. I doubted my literary skills, but you understood something I didn't and gently coaxed something from me I never knew I could do. I doubted that I would ever get anyone reading anything I wrote, but like the magic weaver you are you painstakingly messaged people to convince them to give me a shot and no words can ever begin to describe my gratification at your unwavering support. I believed that my ramblings would never be understood, that my skills pale in comparisson to writers like you, the latter is still something I firmly believe, and you can never convince me otherwise, but one doubt really has been eradicated from my mind, somebody did understand me, you did, and the beautiful poem you wrote captured every emotion I was battling to portray with such succinct grace and beauty that you really have left me speechless D. Anything i write is feels like shallow emotion in the reservoir of emotions you spill in everything you write Delilah. We share the same words but the magic you weave is spectacularly you, in every line, every word you spell beauty Delilah. Charismatic, enigmatic beauty.
Edited by manreet_gill - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
That what sooo beautiful! I don't have the words...<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
an amazing endint to an amazing story...

loved it...
the endig couldnt hav been better..beautifull

hope to c with another story soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Did you just say it met our expectations
I would say hell yes and more than expectation too
So what no convo between the protagonist
What mattered was their love
And how Arnie got his khushi back in more ways than one
Ahhh just what I expected and more

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