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Posted: 12 years ago
Really beautiful story!
No words to describe d fabulous piece of work :)
please do continue writing!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the ss. Beautifully written.

Any plans to continue writing?
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Posted: 11 years ago
This FF gives a new meaning to the phrase 'divine love'. The way leaves shed in winter to dawn colorful cloaks of green for a new spring, Khushi shed her past with the help of Arnav who bought a sea of colours in her life.
As you said the story wasn't about Khushi but about Arnav and his glorious love. For what else can such an unadulterated and pure feeling be called? Love is a phase where the happiness of your beloved is as essential to you as your own. Love is accepting and open to all flaws. Love is twisted and strong. Love is something which can't be described.

But you somehow managed to pen it all down. You managed to pen down love.

If that isn't glorious and beautiful and lovely, I don't know what is.

Breath taking. Take a bow ma'am.

Take a bow.

ps-cheers Del! Convincing M is the awesomest thing you've ever done. :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
The last Chapter was as fascinating and wonderful as the other 3, or may be more.

The opening line is not only philosophical but also reflective.

The perspectives of Anjali, Gayatri, Shashi and Garima were very skillfully, efficiently and strategically placed one after the other. All the perspectives were interconnected with each other and punctuated with the events in Arnav and Khushi's life.

Every person related to Khushi and Arnav was like a trainspotter- observing, knowing and feeling Khushi's bereavement and Arnav's emptiness. Yet they had no scope to help the two souls. And exactly here, Arnav, like a Messiah, healed Khushi and himself, and met his happiness again. It was his triumph.

Arnav's presence and Arnav himself were so, so cathartic to Khushi, that in the concluding paragraphs I almost forgot that Khushi ever went through a pain, a loss. It felt like they were always like that- happy and together and totally content and in peace in their own universe.

Their bond, whether in the form of romantic love or childhood friendship, is unique and ethereal.

Their Love is sublime.

Their wonderful journey is made up of stuff with which starry dreams are made of. And your words flawlessly weaved such a magic that they left me in a trance like state. I sit and wonder like a hopeless romantic, that what will I do so that I meet a friend and lover like the Arnav you created.

The moment where Arnav realized as if an epiphany had hit him, that he was in love with Khushi since forever, was awesome.

I just felt that somehow, these two ordinary mortals made an extraordinary and immortal love saga just by loving each other with so much devotion and passion.

I loved the way how you associated all the seasons with various times in their lives.
They are so, so significant.

Do I need to say more, how much I loved and enjoyed reading your amazing story?

Thank You Delilah for letting us know and read about this lovely story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I sincerely apologise for being this late in posting my comment.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank You so much Manreet Di, for writing such a fabulous story and letting us read it.

Undoubtedly, I'd like to read more stories from you in the near future.
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Posted: 11 years ago
This is simply beautiful. They must have met under Autumn's dawn because they drifted apart like fall leaves. And when they met again, it must have been under the clear blue sky of Spring when their love blossomed like buds. The seasons have been used so beautifully. This isn't Arnav's story. Or Khushi's. This is the story of divinity. Of hearts filled with joy and deep happy sighs. It made me think- how can something so heartbreaking be so beautiful?

You have written a delightful tale Manreet. Hope you write more. Thanks a lot for sharing it. Goodbye...until we meet again.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: manreet_gill

And that my friends is the end.

First of all thank you reading, liking and commenting on this you didnt have to but you did, and that counts for a lot, so really, thank you!


This story could have easily been fleshed out if I had decided to explore Khushi's plight, or Arnav and Khushi's journey towards love, but for me the story was never about that, it was always about Arnav meeting his happiness figuratively and literally, and I hope I was able to portray that. I wanted to meet Arnav at different points in this phase of his life and explore his emotions and thoughts relating to someone he holds very close to his heart. His love was unconditional when it came to his Khushi, because that is what true friendship is, as for the discovery of love in a romantic sense, it was always there, but it took him a while to realise it. Sometimes it can take just one conversation or one look from another and you begin to see that person in a new light there is always a right time and place for everything, this was their time. Arnav and Khushi have known each other since they were children, they know everything about each other, and so a change in their relationship is simply never considered, as what they have is too precious to share in any other light. And it is with this level of comfort that Arnav holds a sense of proprietorship towards Khushi, she is in every sense his happiness. They have always been so close that the two beings could readily merge into one; they are in every sense each other's, always have been, and always will be. With this thought you may consider why I never explored Khushi's perspective even once in this story, this is because this wasn't her story, it was her Arnav's.

Khushi has a story of her own, she has a happy childhood and a perfect romance, with a perfect marriage, and suddenly everything is lost, the only dependable anchor she feels she has is her childhood friend who truly understands her. If I began to try and portray Khushi's side of the story then I feel I would have lost track of what this story was intended to be about. And so I kept Khushi almost detached from the story. You saw her pain, and her metamorphosis through the eyes of her family and best friend, you painted a Khushi you wanted to see in your minds based on what the family members and Arnav were telling you. I wanted the family member's perspective because I wanted the readers to feel like they too are a family member rooting for their beloved Arnav and Khushi, willing them to find each other. The family perspectives were purposely placed in a different timeline as I believe that hindsight is a beautiful thing; it can help you see with clarity something which is lost in the present.

Something which I feel perhaps annoyed you is the fact that I never once explored any conversation between our two central protagonists. Arnav and Khushi's relationship is impenetrable, it's rare and so we can never begin to fully understand the purity and strength of it, these two can speak intimately with their eyes and therefore any actual conversation between the two, frankly felt too private to intrude upon, hence why I didn't. Many wanted to know what Arnav told Khushi in the park in the third update; in my mind, they had a conversation about a childhood game so many of us have played, the moral of being lost and finding in each other struck a chord with Khushi that day that led her to shed some of the depression that weighed heavily on her fragile shoulders.


As for the seasons, autumn as beautiful as it is signifies death, spring a new beginning and summer always holds a sense of romanticism, does it not? I hope that this story has lived up to your expectations, and I'm sorry if you think it is too short, but this is the way I saw this going when I was politely coerced into making this OS into a short story! Finally if you have any questions please do ask and I will be happy to answer them.


Manreet :)

a very positive and truly well approached story. like ur way of approach... letting an insight into what happens/thoughts of people in real life.

loved reading it... thanks

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow very different ss indeed...Love it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Loved this SS...thanks for sharing the link...

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