Virat&Manvi ff -Tblby#2 (link for the 3rd thread- Pg 151 :D) - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome update

loved it.
finally virat past out
very well written...all the emotion were written so well
virat's insecurity...and manvi dellima to handle him
loved the way he came to meet her
superd yaar👏
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome ayesha...the way you write about emotions is just superb...rosh hospital part was heart wrenching..felt really bad for her...and virat not able to respond or react to her words..uve shown his numbness perfectly..all this came as a shocker...rosh self mutilation..his not being able to tell rosh he loves her when she was breathing her last..failing to fulfill her last wish...thats why he felt so guilty when he actually confessed his love to manvi..love the fact that he won't let mannu walk away..he really needs her..this shows his love only but he is not ready to admit...virat ji back in his angry avatar..i think virman should get married now as he can't bear her absence...haww the advantage of virman being neighbor..he can sneak in whenever he feels like..the kiss was hot..kamina virat ji, kissing manvi is more than ok then he doesn't feel guilty :p bas i love u se prob hai..waiting for virat to come out of this guilt & his past... & its ok if u r busy..update when u r free..
Edited by roshreb - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wowww... its really mindblowing update friend... virat is not want to let manvi go... he want her... he needed her... he can tolerate anything except being away from her... wowww... woww.. wowww. I like this side of him very much...
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG...The past was complelty scary and yes his behaviour was justifed...he left without knowing much on her reasons and secluded himself from every one..and then when he did know he couldn't bring himself frward to provide the acceptance and warmth what roshni was hoping before she died...complelty justified his nighmares to it and his guilt as wel..but he didn't realize in amdist of all this he has fallen in love with the person who loved him even after rejection...he wouldn't allow her to walk of nor will take no for answer...he would do anything to have this hope of his life..and it so obvious the way he behaves with her...Loved their moment together...but for Virat realiztaion will take time..as he isn't able to gauge his thoughts and action.,.and this is huge difference between the relation he had with rshni and Maanvi now...he doens't allow Maanvi walk off no matter what..what he desired from a relation, the peace and the happiness is what now Maanvi has...Eager for next Ayesha..Thanks for the PM!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I dnt wanna talk abt his past 🤔 Bt I love the way Manvi supported him.. And I knw it he will gt angry on her. For leaving him alone 😉 And Manvi's dad is super cool lmao 😊 Fab update 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
res

meko thoda confusion!!!

1) y rosh committed suicide!!!
2) y she rejected viru!!!

baki aas always fab uppu!!!! i <3ed your this idea of weekend uppu's beneficial for me!!! lolz!!!
Edited by abbay - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ur breth taking updates...hayyeee...🤗
ufff...romantic one...and virat ji...omg...☺️
im mad fr ur updates...oh god...👏
just luved it...❤️
and roshini's death...was really hert breaking...💔
wana read more...(instead of continu sooon 😛)
and thnx fr the pm...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update Ayesha!! 👏👏 You are just awesome ⭐️.. Beautiful portrayal of emotions.. Virat's past is so painful and shocking.. Rosh's confession, her last wish and finally her death- heart wrenching moments.. He couldn't fulfill Rosh's last wish and his guilt still haunts him from time to time.. But he is not really at fault.. He left her because he was heart broken.. Fate played a cruel game with them.. But he will never let Manvi go away from him and I really love the way he feels about Manvi.. He loves her, he just doesn't want to accept it yet.. He is always restless when she is not around and now he can't even stay away from her for long.. And that makes me happy! 😃 Thank god they are neighbours! 😛 Ekks they kissed again! 😳 It was so passionate.. Loved it ❤️.. Wonderful update!! Will be waiting for the next part.. Take your time! Thank you for the pm.. Take care 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow wat an update ...fab one...Virat's guilt is eating him up...finally he opens up to Maanvi...love the way Maanvi is handling him...hope he is not harsh with her...thanks so much for updating
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was awsome nd heart weenching update...
I dont have enough words to describe itt...
Past is really relates to it...loved it how manvi was comforting nd consoling him..
Virat wanted manvi to be with him..coz he is afraid to loose her...
Loved itt..plzzz let him understand his feelings for manvi...
Nd their kiss..it was so amazing..nd I knw u will give excellent updates in future also...
Soo update soon nd thanxx for pm...

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