Virat&Manvi ff -Tblby#2 (link for the 3rd thread- Pg 151 :D)

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vaarya

@Vaarya53

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

whoa!!!pretty long update ayesha! it was simply amazing ...I'm feeling loss of words at this update ...it was so emotional and heart wrenching and yet so full of serenity!! i so so loved it and all those little sweet and salty moments you describe between them are just so adorable ...and the kiss ..oh my!! ayesha abi ye haal hai...later on to i think u have whole plan to kill us. that was all literally splendid ..i won't demand anything from u in the storyline as i completely trust u for the way ull be carrying it forward!!

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luvmanat

@luvmanat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

u make us speechless...

there are no words to describe how ur story is...

i will say HATTSS.. OFF...

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mridula

@-Minion-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

awesome update.feel bad for rosh.she realised her love after virat left.i understand virat dillema now he felt guild becz he didn't say anything to rosh when she asked for forgiveness.virman moment was really passionate yet hot.virat ji is so stubban.
Happy that finally virat share his pain with manvi.hope he now understand his love for her.
Its difficult to wait for next week.if possible plz update.

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nida khan

@nidakh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

thanx for pm ans superb update😊

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Nikhita Dixit

@ambarsariya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

BEAUTIFUL UPDATE AYESHA!!!

ARGGHH!!!😡 BUT IT WAS! NOT LONG FOR ME!😆😆

COZ YOU UPDATED AFTER A LONG TYM...

I EXPECTED A BIG ONE...😊😊

PAST WAS SO HURTING...😭😭

PLZZZ TRY TO COME SOON!!😭

LOVE YA...⭐️⭐️

HAPPY WEEKEND!!😊

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Fab updt dear...worth waiting...awww roshanis death was really sad...but that wasnt virats fault...ohhh so she wanted to hear i luv u too frm him...but unfortunatelly time wasnt in his favour...sad...

Ok its just my POV ha...why i m feeling like ki virat is using manvi to reduce his guilt, his mistakes, his pain...as if he is finding roshni in manvi...n if it is true then its unfair with manvi...bcs then he wont forget roshni ever...he hv to give manvi her own place in his heart n life...so pls clear my confusion soon...lolzzz

n ok cont soon take ur time

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shaimah

@shaimah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Awesome update
Loving the bond between manvi and virat
Virat cant stay without manvi...excited to read how manvi will handle him
Excited for the next part
Continue soon and thanks for the pm!!

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nrithyao

@nrithyao

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

superb update
the way virat's part is written is so amazing
feeling bad for virat
he was completely broken & guilty for not holding roshni's hand when she wanted him to
loved how maanvi understood him & soothed his pain
happy that atlast padmini has started talking about virat to maanvi
loved virat's entry into maanvi's room & the kiss
thanks a lot for the pm