Virat&Manvi ff -Tblby#2 (link for the 3rd thread- Pg 151 :D)

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misaki

@misaki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#211

Oh My Freaking Gosh!..

A KISS?!!!!... no way!

YEY!!!!!

Haha.. on a serious note.. Virats feelings are finally getting out of control and he doesn't know what he can do about it except letting it all out and he finally is learning how to do that..might not be the v. sane thing to do.. But hey who are we to complain when his lady love doesn't mind huh?.. 😉

So we all know and Abhijeet knows that Virat had nothing to do with Roshnis apparent problems..

Looks like everyone else thought otherwise including Rohan.. So they think Virat was the cause?

Interesting.. would love to see How Manvi would make Roan realise that Virat is innocent.. infact he was a victim too and that without Virat getting uncomfortable with her closeness to Rohan.

This story keeps getting interesting and VirMan's story all the more intense..

Im loving the plot!..

Can't wait to read the next update!

Edited by misaki - 11 years ago

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anvyagnihotri

@anvyagnihotri

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#212

wow..

awsm update ...

loved it..

amzng update..

update next part soon cant wait

plz plzzz plzz plzz plzz

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#213

i want to c manvis mothers reaction on virats past...something horrible :P

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kalpana

@jia123sagar

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#214

it was amazing

loved the update

finally maanvi knows virat's past

they kissed

plz cont soon

thanks for the pm

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keerthana

@keerthu27

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#215

hey sry i am a regular reader but dint get enough time to comment or like

becoz i am lazy in commenting u can ask other writers too😆

welll love ur story very much!!

keep going

loving a new kind of virman here😳

continue soon plzzz

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GOOGLU

@GOOGLU

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#216

Awsm update...luved it!!!
So now virat's past part is cmpltd...
U r fbls writer ...show virat and roshani's pain and guilt in awsm way...feel sad for both!!!!!!!!!!
wht abt rohan ...hw manvi made him undrstnd virat's pov.???????
As always virman part was awsm...virman hot-hot kiss scene...blushing @@@@
Manvi and her mother scene also luving and well written...luv their con. on virat first time @@@@@@
totly mindblowing update !!!!!!!!!!!
hw cn we will wait till next week ????? Plz try to update soon @@@
THANX ALOT FOR PM DEAR...

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Swati

@sweetyyyyyyy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#217

Finally flashback finished...

nw w can see virman more...

bt dear pls give one more update n then take break. ... pls pls pleeease

It's ur mistake, u stopped at wrong place😭... N we r eager to knw wat will happen next. ..

plss upd..e s..n...

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manuthi mathi

@manuthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#218

nice update...virat told his past to manvi... so sad for roshini... manvi mam and manvi convo abt virat is so nice... virat kissed manvi... waiting for next...

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jayanthi

@jayprabu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#219

Awesome update. The past is very much convincing . The guilt he is carrying around for not fulfilling roshini's last wish is out standing . Now Manvi's job is very hard how to make him realise she will not leave him forever. Thanks for the pm. Pls continue soon.