ok so here i am to comment and sorry for not doing it all the way but now i will try to do it as regularly as you update for us and thank you so much for that ^___^
firstly the story line is amazing and the chaacters are sketched out so beautifully and thoroughly that makes it even more wonderful...and i am talking about all the characters coz this is a plus point of it that mainly the focus is on virman but the story moves along the other charcters as well focussing on their point of views now and then when the story requires it...i have always loved your writing style from the time i read BC but the intensity and the deepness has increased even more in this one and i love it...coming to the charcter of manvi its such a beautifull one so full fo love full of emotions and confusion at times which makes it relatable...her love is most of the time without any expectation but that would be wrong to say that its always without expecting something because its human nature everyone at some point of their lifes wish to be loved by the one they love with their heart and soul and i love you for not ignoring this point as a writer and a story builder there were moments in few updates when her wish overpowered her and it was amazing to read other sides of her charcater now coming to virat this character is so deep and intense that makes you nothing but read more and more about him the pain . anguish , guilt and all the suffering is so beautifully written yet painful to read at the same time...the thing i feel about his past is that e lack of communication he had in his relations or better to say which came after his fathers death between him and the people he love and care was somewhere the reason of the mistake he unknowingly did he was at fault but nor completely maybe if he would have stopped and talked to roshini about what he saw or maybe trusted her enough to not let a mere sight take a decision that he now regrets all this would have been completely different but destiny has its own plans...the fear of losing manvi the last thing he has some times makes him lose control and comes out in the form of anger which he badly needs to control otherwise he will do something regretful yet again... and i loved the way virat felt that how can manvi love him so much afetr all they have experienced in their relationship till now and how she can make him feel the intensity of her love with merely looking into his eyes that was beautifully written and my favorite part...and i believe there must be something to the past from rohan's side too and im all eager to read that ...hope my comment made sense to you coz it was some broken pieces of what i feel about this story love you for writing it and belated congartulations for the second thread you have a long way to go with your talent girl
lost of love ❤️
ps : ignore the mistakes coz i wrote it second time after accidentally deleting the first one 😆
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