Liquorice Burning#3 [ArHi] Part 29 Updated 091316

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: -Aria-

Weekend sounds good?

I hope from today Monday is also considered as weekend? When will that day be... :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: moomin4455
I find Deeya annoying...but her heart is in the right place. So Arnav was faithful...and now Khushi knows it. And he saved her...
What will Khushi do now?

I'm tempted to say, run to him, kiss and make up. if only. 😆

Originally posted by: mklam
Wonderful story. Arnav's despair when she's missing, Khushi's grit and determination to follow her passion (flavours of the kitchen seeps throughout the story) and now the redemption begins. look forward to the next update!
yeah, we cant keep khushi away from the kitchen. its her biggest stress buster. welcome to the thread :)

Originally posted by: lovebarun...
so beautiful.. arnav's one sentence " Its Mrs. Raizada" nailed it.. waiting for the next update already..😛
but will mrs. raizada accept her reality so easily?

Originally posted by: akaps
2 updates - That was a treat.
Enjoyed reading.

Thanks

Originally posted by: shalini_s
TG he came and saved her.. though literally made her agree to Mrs. Raizada..
Not quite, it hasnt hit khushi with full force yet. otherwise she'd be back in the kitchen making something...already

Edited by -Aria- - 11 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Arjuhisis
oh that was a fantastic update aria
loved it
at last arnav has told her the truth about Natasha - happy to see khushi accepting this truth
nice update dear
will wait for the next

she knows now, but he still hasnt apologized yet. long way to go!

Originally posted by: shree10
wow Aria what a treat!! 2 chaps at one go! Hope it happens more!
For the first time I loved Diya ! The way she gave Arnav back.. "Just like you 2 got married"!! 👏

2nd update was angsty. By his end of deal, does Arnav mean not being in affair-relationship with anybody ?? Well LG, I think it's lot more than that. But better late than never!

I loved Khushi's "I expected you to do this that night!"
yes, it refers to that understanding that was established between these two about being faithful despite this being a "forced-hate" marriage.

Originally posted by: pearl.b
wow 2 updates...u made my day dear..coming to the updates, they were bang on..Thank god deeya asked arnav to look out for khushi from that vile manager...Arnav n khushi have a lot of things to clear between them...love it when Arnav turns all protective towards khushi...brilliantly written...Thanks a lot for updating...will be waiting for the next chapter...greedy much...Thanks again dear
Thanks Pearl.

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Reserved for response :)

Edited by -Aria- - 11 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Congrats on the new thread. Waiting for the update

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

yeah -new thread. hope you feeling better and we see you soon back on IF

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

congrats on the new thread

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

gr88...we reached the new thread dear...

congrats...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

waiting for the nayaa wala part...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Prasanthi
I will be here shortly, its morning chores. Be back!
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Where is part 22...!?😲😆

How dare someone insults Mrs.Raizada that too in front of Mr. Raizada? 😛 I was waiting for some more dishum dishum, but its OK. 😊 Is this the start of some bonding between Deeya and Raizada and indirectly with Mrs. Raizada? There are chances you see. 😉

I just hope whatever he speaks she listens and whatever she has undergone he realizes. Good ones A. Waiting for your next awesome more some. 😃

absolutely, he may scream, yell and deny all he wants to her face, but apparently, the entire world needs to know not to mess with mrs. raizada,wish someone would hold up a mirror to his face😆

Thanks P, for everything :)

Originally posted by: Hina69
Amazing and quite intense!

Happy that arnav took care of that slimy manager!!

Oh my i just loved ArHi convo in the last part when he asked her to stay with him in the hotel...and when he pleaded her to look at him..and how honestly he explained about those rumours/news...so beautiful!!! But still arnav has a long way to go as khushi is changed now indicated by her dialogue ''i dont get hurt very easily''!!

Thank u so much for the pm!!:)

hey i am sending you a buddy request..plz accept it...i know how much it take time to send pms individually...it would be easy for you to send me pms...!

Take care!:)
Yep, he has quite a way to go. and he could make it easier by starting with a sorry. Thanks Hina, welcome to the thread btw. :)

Edited by -Aria- - 11 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: siamesecat
I absolutely love your story. There is an understated elegence in the way you write. It gives the story a heartwrenching emotional pull. Well done.