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Posted: 12 years ago
#21


Originally posted by: sman

Awesome ..Arnav is super hero..


Originally posted by: nataliya

👏 this keeps on getting betterrr




Originally posted by: piyaaich

wow 2 updates...

Awsum update...

Waiting fr nxt



Thank you guys. Glad you liked the updates :)






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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Do we get an update today?????? me waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: pearl.b

Do we get an update today?????? me waiting...


I wish.

Let's shoot for the weekend?

ps. haven't written a word yet!!😛

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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Crazy4Sobti

Chapter 20

You know one of the things I really like about Arnav Singh Raizada is whatever he does; he does with perfection, that includes his denial, mistakes, hatred, love, now his guilt and "Stalking". He is doing a pretty good job of stalking his own WIFE. Way to go Mr. Raizada!! 🤣 when you say it that way, oh boy ASR have you lost it! 😆 ok jokes aside, it was always shown that Arnav has his heart in the right place even though his approach may be questionable. Now that he knows what he wants, and that he has erred, he will be relentless. Mrs. Raizada has no idea what's heading her way.

Oh! I absolutely love the "Civil conversations" (if I call them one) between Arnav and Deeya. From the moment Deeya met Arnav she knows what buttons to push to rile him up. And all her anger and jibes are stemming from the fact that Khushi has left him and based on her research she perceives Arnav to be some Casanova, somebody who has no value for women. Though she is has no idea about Arnav and Khushi's past, she is not wrong in her thinking. Because the way Arnav treated Khushi, it shows he didn't respect her. Deeya will probably unleash a tusami of her anger and cuss words and even crawl Arnav's face if she comes to know what Arnav made Khushi go through. But she was very perceptive to not let her disgust come in way of protecting Khushi and she shared the details with him. So, all she is doing is protecting Khushi, either from Arnav or from others around her. Deeya won't be here for too long, I want to focus more on ArHi now. actually, want to share this one thing here, i've realised, i desperately want to/need to write a happy OS/SS/FF on ArHi now. This gloom and doom makes ArHi seem perpetuallr y sad. and i nearly started another FF till better sense prevailed.the voice in my head was like, What the! No, No, No!😆 and I stopped. Sorry have i digressed from my response? alrite coming back to ArHi.

Where did this Arnav get this ocean of patience? I cannot believe he is standing no, actually tolerating a girl like Deeya who is anything but intimidated by him, she doesn't even answer him properly and clearly shows her dislike for him in each and every word and gesture. Yet, Arnav is here dealing with her, having a conversation with her and ignoring her taunts. All for Khushi and only Khushi, he will handle 100 Deeyas for her sake. Where did he get this ocean of patience from? This need to do the right thing? And nothing more important than getting his wife back home with him where she has always belonged?

One thing Arnav is doing right not getting distracted with all the things happening around him, he is getting everything out of the day to focus on and bringing Khushi home.

No distractions this time around!

Thanks Geeta :)


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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
are we getting an update anytime today? eagarly waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: kushiarnav1

very very nice updates ...we r lucky we got 2... i guess,story is moving in to intense direction now...

part 20 : arnav want to do everything on his own to get kushi...he don't want to depend on any one...the way he approached deeya ,to find about kushis where bouts,her distress...he can feel that she is in trouble...

he handle deeya with sooo much patience...that's surprising raizada😛...din't like the way deeya at all she doesn't know anything about arnav ,she answered rudely...thank god at the end she told arnav kushis distress...

😆yep, patience has not been his thing has it? but dont be so sure, its here to stay. KKG has the knack of pushing all the wrong buttons😆

part 21: manager gone...😆😆😆...hoping kushi allow him to talk...please kushi ki bacchi isbar bhagna mathh...😉...the way u potrayed kushis hesitation after entering his apartment simply superb and hamara raizada also instantly answered...iam very happy for that...

Khushi has no choice but to listen, provided raizada actually talks!😆

hoping u will update soon...tadpanamath hamko...😉😆...

yeah, slightly late this time around. but

thank u for the 2 updates back to back...
cheers...
Thank you for commenting :)


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Posted: 12 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: jojo21

Wow what an amazing 2 parts. I'm glady Deeya met Arnav and even told him to go to Paradiso; while it was necessary to do so to protect Khushi, it was still generous.

An angry Arnav definitely not one to mess with. And boy did I want him to just RIP the guy apart. Reading the word chocolate face and then just the crass manner in which the manager talked about Khushi, that section really did its job, I was SO angry. Ugh disgusting human being.

😆 yep, disgusting is the word. i'm sure Khushi was glad to see LG there, even though she wouldn't admit it for her life, at the moment.

I was happy to see Khushi willing albeit reluctantly to stay at Arnav's place. The hesitancy that exists with all the hurt between them was so palpable. Let's see how Khushi reacts to Arnav's admission.

Let's see. Thank you :)


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: babburibnr

are we getting an update anytime today? eagarly waiting...


Weekend sounds good?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
congrats on the new thread
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananya321

two back 2 back update ... looks like a big gift to me ... wow...
i love deeya and the way she is wary of arnav ... she is good friend of khushi isnt it ...
the last part of both the updates was superb ...
for part 20 when diya said ... "like you two got married"
and for part 21 when arnav felt the need to assure khushi that all those news were rumours, none of them was truth ...
it almost slipped from his tongue that she is still his wife ...
... the way khushi asked that she needed his assurance that night ... now she is perfectly capable of pulling out the things on her own ...

waiting for the next update ...


Thanks Ananya for recommending this FF on Shruti's thread :)

Deeya is defintely a good friend, who looks out for her in a way, Khushi's own family failed to at times.

Khushi should be able to figure out that there is something amiss, unless she decides to overlook Arnav's words. let's see, if she finds out that he is not exactly her ex yet!!

Thanks Ananya :)

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