VIRMAN SS:||Jab Tak Tum Ho Mere Saath||chap 8 pg 16 *NEW* - Page 5

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waiting for next...update soon😃

Awesome update!

Awesome..! Like VirMan here...cute, funny, romantic and serious at the same time..Waiting for next!!!

Cute update yaar..

superb update. Loved the convo between jeevika nd her father. It was so emotional. Rajat want to accept her relation bt his big size ego came on his way. Then virman convo was so sweet aww love this naughty virat so much. Very well written dear. Do update sn nd thanx for the scrap lolz

awesome update
loved it
rajat and jeevika talk on phone is emotional
hope he accepts her and viren soon
continue soon
thanks for the pm

hey i loved ur all updates...❤️

OMG...is this my story?? m i dreaming or wat...hahaha...seriously guys u all r amazing...thnk u so so so much fr such a lovely response...u ppl r so motivating...thnk u thnk u thnk u ❤️

hello guys,

Same day at night in kapoor mansion:

*jatin came back frm the office...sitting relaxly in his bedroom doing some TP on laptop...n meera entered*

M: aaj pata he kya hua?

J: (still his concentration on laptop) hmmm kya hua?

M: tumhari pyaari behena ka phone aya tha papaji ko

J: (shockingly) kya? Kab?

M: dopeher me

J: (bit confusingly) but tumhe kaise pata

M: (smiled sarcastically) usase tumhe kya? Me tumhari tarah thodi na hu...apne kan ankh kule rakhti hu dinbhar...kab kaha kya ho raha he bohot achhe se pata hota he...agar tumhare bharose sab chhod diya hota na to ab tak ham raste pe hote...

J: jaan tum aisa kyu keh rahi ho...me jo bhi kar raha hu hamare liye hi to kar raha hu na

M: ohhh really??? Apne aap ko creadit dene ki jarurat nahi he jatin ye jo kuchh ho raha he na ye meri (pointing her index finger towards herself) wazahase ho raha he...mene hi aaj tak papaji ke dil me vadheras aur jeevika ke liye us aag ko jalaye rakha he tabhi uski itni koshishonke bawajud bhi aaj tak papaji ne use apnaya nahi he...warna tum to kisi kam ke ho nahi...ek laute bete ho unke firbhi aaj tak vo tum par jeevika jitna bharosa nahi karte...

M: aur vo jeevika...vadhera khankdan me shadi karne ke bad bhi use chain nahi he jo yaha mera sukh chain chhinane pe tuli hue he...(angrily throwing a pillow on the floor) muze samaz nahi aata ki ye chaati kya he...(pointing her finger) me bata rahi hu jatin...ye sab kuchh hamara he sirf aur sirf hamara...

J: (holding her both hands) jaan tum chinta kyu karti ho...tum jaisa soch rahi ho na waisa kuchh nahi hone wala...me jeevika ko janta hu vo paise property ke pichhe nahi he

*though jatin also hates jeevika but he knw her frm childhood, she is selfless...she don't want anything from anyone in return except love...but he is in full control of his wife who don't like any positive word for jeevika*

M: achha badi tarif ho rahi he aaj apni behen ki...bohot pyaar aa raha he uspar...(starts crying n sheding crocodile tears...she always do this to proove herself right but jatin never understand the difference btw her fake tears) ha mehi buri hu na...sab to meri hi galti he jo me tumse itna pyar karti hu, din raat sirf tumhare bare me aur tumhari success ke bare me fikar karti reheti hu...aur badle me muze kya milta he? Kuchh nahi...

J: (this is jatins weakness, he cant c the tears in meeras eyes...bcs he love her n trust her way too much...that's y he thinks she is always right) jaan pls tum rona band kar...dekho aisa nahi he...mere kehene ka vo matlab nahi tha...(wiping her fake teas) I knw tum kitna kuchh karti ho is ghar ke liye mere liye...ok I m sorry...dobara aisa nahi hoga...jaisa tum chhogi bilkul waise hi hoga...(hug her) I love u jaan

M: (rolled her eyes n unwillingly hugged him back) I love u too darling

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late a night at vadgera house: virkas bedroom

*aayan is sleeping peacefully in his cradle beside virikas bed*

*jeevika is sleeping next to viren, her head is resting on his chest little below his left shoulder...1 hand is wrapped around his waist...while viren was playing with her hairs...both r cuddling in each others arms*

*jeevika told every thing to viren of watever happened on convo...after so much rona dhona frm jeevikas side n consoling session frm viren side...they r resting in each others arms...to fing some peace...viren knws how much she miss her father but everytime whenever she talk with rajat she get only pain in return...he cant c her like this...he is trying so hard frm last 2 yrs to erase all the pain all the miseries frm her life but he knw he cant fullfil this empty place in her life...n that's y he hates rajats too much...bcs he is the only reason fr his wifes sadness*

Vi: jeevika

J: hmmm

Vi: kal puna me mr. ahuja ke beti ki engagement he...unhone hum sabko bulaya he

J: ha toh

Vi: virat to nahi ja sakta kyuki kal uski important meeting he yaha aur dad ka bhi hona jaruri so obviously maa aur maanvi bhi nahi jayenge...aarav to waise bhi aise functions me nahi jata to me soch raha tha ki tum aur me chlate he...sham tak wapas laut ayenge

J: (came out of his embrace with a jerk) kya? Nahi viren tum ye kaisi bate kar rahe ho...aayan ko chhodke...na baba na me nahi aa sakti...aayan aaj tak kabhi 1 hr bhi mere bagair raha nahi he...aur pure din use akela chhod kar to me bilkul bhi nahi ja sakti...nahi nahi...tum akele chale jao

Vi: are kyu nahi chalo na...dekho jeevika (cupped her face in his hands) waise bhi aayan ke janam (birth) ke bad hum dono kahi gaye hi nahi he...hame bilkul waqt hi nahi mila he ek dusre ko dene ke liye...aur sabse important to ye ki tumhe thode change ki jarurat he, nayi jagah jaogi, naye logonse milogi to tumhe achha lagega...aur me kaha tumhe apne ladle ko chhodke hamesha ke liye chalne ke liye keh raha hu...ek din ki hi to bat he sham tak to ham waise hi laut ayenge

J: nahi viren tum samaz nahi rahe ho...aayan aaj tak kabhi mere bagair raha nahi he...me use kaise yu akele chhodkar ja sakti hu

Vi: are akele kaha chhodkar ja rahe he hum use...bhul rahi ho kya...uske ek aur mom - dad he is ghar me...manvi aur virat un donoke hote huye hame ayaan ki chinta karne ki koyi jarurat nahi he...aur vaise bhi aayan ko manvi mil jaye to fir to use kisiki koyi jarurat hi nahi he

J: (smiled at him) ha vo bhi he dono bohot pyaar karte he aayan se...apne khud ke bachhe jaisa

Vi: (he thought she is convinced) wahi toh...aur me to keheta hu ki dono jitna time aayan ke sath rahenge na utna hi achha he

J: kya matlab?

Vi: matlab dekho pehele to ye ki dono aayan ke sath time spend karenge tabhi to khud ke baby ke bare me bhi songe...aurrr

J: aur kya? O.o

Vi: (pulled her towards him n nuzzling in her neck) aur hame bhi thodi privacy milegi

J: (blushing in sheds of red) (pushed him back) viren tum bhi na...apne hi bete se privacy chahiye tumhe

Vi: are to usme galag kya he(again trying to come closer to her) jab privacy milegi tabhi to mummy-papa uski sister ko la payenge na...to isme usika to fayada he (teasing tone)

J: (pushed him back) :O :O :O (hitting him with pillow) kitne besharam hote ja rahe ho tum viren...

Vi: achha achha think he shuuu...aayan uth jayega...but batao to sahi ki hum kal puna ja rahe he ki nahi? (hoping eyes)

J: ummm nahi...i mean muze sochna padega

Vi: (now he is using his ultimate trick which never failed on jeevika) (making a fake angry face) thik he mat aao...me hi chala jaunga apni us nayi wali PA ko lekar...fir mat ana mere pichhe pichhe meri jasusi karne...me to waise bhi kuchh huhi nahi na (sleeping on bed facing his back to jeevika)

J: :O :O :O...kya? kya kaha tumne? Us safed chudail ko lekar jaoge tum apne sath...tumhe chhodungi nahi viren me (turned him back harshly...while viren was still making an angry face but trying so hard to control his laughter) aur kyu nahi ayungi tumhare pichhe...tum jaha jaha jaoge me waha waha aungi tumhare pichhe...chhodne wali nahi hu me tumhe

Vi: achha to wadakaro ki me jaha jaunga tum waha aogi mere sath...bina koyi sawal kare, bina kisi shikayat ke

J: (don't knw y but she felt something strange, something unusual this time...but she neglect all those thoughts n promised him) (putting her hand in him) I promise tum jaha jaoge me waha ungi tumhare pichhe pichhe...kabhi tumhara sath nahi chhodungi...me to kahi bhi jane ke liye ready hu JAB TAK TUM HO MERE SAATH

Vi: (viren smiled n hugged her tightly n kissed her on forehead) thank u

J: (sadly) but hamara aayan?

Vi: ohhh hooo virat aur manvi he na uske liye...unke hote hua y to worry?

*with this both fall in a sleep in each others arms*