VIRMAN SS:||Jab Tak Tum Ho Mere Saath||chap 8 pg 16 *NEW*

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello guys i m baby_yellow the writer of ||Jab Tak Tum Ho Mere Saath|| i made this new acc bcs suddenly some problem accured n now i m not able to access my previous acc anymore nor i m able to find my story's thread 😡 😡 😡...so i m upset 😭 😭 😭 😭 ...i did a complaint to IF DTs...but i havent received any any msg frm them so finally i decided to start with new thread...so i m posting here once again


***INDEX***
CS : pg 1
part 1 - 3 : pg 2
part 4 (i) : pg 6
part 4 (ii) : pg 8
part 5 (A+B) : pg 10
part 6 : pg 11
part 7 : pg 13
part 8 : pg 16
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Posted: 12 years ago
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character sketch :-

Manvi: yes she is Mrs. Manvi vadhera...23 yrs old...a lovely wife of virat singh adhera and the brand new daughter in law of vadhera house...she is so bubbly, carefree, naughty, full of life n so much talkative...that's why her husband call her chatterbox...manvi is madly in love with virat...manvi is the only daughter of Mr n Mrs chaudhari...she always craved for sibling...n god fulfilled her wish by giving jeevika to her...though they r devrani-jethani but they r more like a sisters...that's u she calls her di' instead of bhabhi'... manvis loves aayan so much...like her own son...she is like 2nd mother to him


Virat: Mr. virat singh vadhera...26 yrs old...hot n handsome, prankster, careless, irresponsible...that's why his father always unhappy with him bcs of his ignorance towards his carrier...n bcs of him his younger brother is also follows his footprint...but now his is married with manvi...his lady love...after so many hardwork n so many attempt he finally won her...but he is not irresponsible any more as he is married man now...that's y he started taking interest in business with help of his brother...rising star in business words...all thanx to his brother...virat is very close to his bother by birth...his elder brother viren...his support system, his best friend, his guide, his mentor, his savior frm their fathers anger...though they hv a father Mr. vikram vadhera...but still nobody understand virat more than viren...not even manvi...virat love his brother so much...he do respect him...viren n virat hv 1 more brother the younger member in vadhra family...Aarav Vadhera...he is so naughty n prankster...just like virat...if viren is idol to virat n then virat is idol to aarav...


Viren: Mr. viren vadhera...28 yrs old...the elder son of Mr n Mrs. Vadhera...he is so sharafi, calm, loving, kind hearted...his fathers proud...vikrams biggest support system...viren handaling his business very well...he is married with jeevika 2 years back...n just a few months back they found their pyaar ki nishani...their son Ayan Vadhera...viren is not like his other 2 brothers...he is 1 woman man...jeevika was his 1st girl friend...whom he met in collage days...n they fall in love...due to some complications jeevika were not able to conceive a baby...but god wasn't unfair with them...n after a 2 long years they got the happiness in their life...jeevika was pregnant...the whole vadhera family was happy like anything...n now after ayans birth he feels complete...now he don't want anything frm god...vikaram was always busy in his business tour...he never gave much attention n time to his family n his kids...so viren took that responsibly...he is the father fr his both brothers...


Jeevika: Mrs. Jeevika vadhera...26 yrs old...the younger daughter of Mr. rajat kapoor...she is so beautiful, soft spoken just like her husband...she loves viren like anything...thats y she even left her fathers house...bcs Rajat n Vikaram r business rivals...thought vikram had no issues with jeevika but rajat was against this marriage...jeevika or viren were not aware abt this before falling in love with each other...jeevika was very close to her father...he even loves her way too much...but at same time he was very egoistic n rigid...for him there is nothing more important than his pride...his this nature forced jeevika to take that decision...n leaved her house n got married with viren...after that rajat n his elder son jatin broke all kind of relationships with jeevika...but she had no regret on her decision...vadheara family accept her whole heartedly...but still somewhere jeevika missing her fathers love in her life...in vadhera house she god everything...mother, father n 2 loving brothers...virat n aarav...who treat jeevika as their elder sister...viren-jeevika helped virat so much in his love life...n they were the biggest supporter that virman r together today...though jeevika is manvis jethani in relation but she loves manvi like her little sister...


Aayan vadhera: he is 6 months old...son of viren-jeevika...jaan of virat n manvi...ankhoka tara of vadhera family...every1s day start with aayan n end on aayan...but he is completely mumma's boy...mumma in the sense jeevika n manvi...hence dady party always get jealous frm this trio...dady party means vire n virat :P


Aarav: Mr. Aarav vadhera...22 years old...younger son of vikram n vanshika vadhera...so naughty n prankstar...bit of spoiled..but good at heart...unmarried n not in a serious relationship with any 1...he has a biggest support system..his both bhabhis...bhabhiyonka dulara


Vikram: Mr. Vikram vadhera...60 yrs old...a successful business tycoon in India...he achieved everything by his hard work n dedication...but in this race he never paid much attention towards his family...but it doesn't mean he don't love them or care them...no its not like that...he loves his family so much...he feel blessed to have a wife like vanshika...who never compleint to him abt anything...they had a arrange marriage...vanshika always stood with her husband in his every decision...she took every responsibility of her sons in his absence without any argument...she is the best wife n best mother...vikram has some business issues with rajat (jeevikas father)...but he never brought them in btw father in law n daughter in laws relationship...he treat jeevika n manvi like his own daughters...he did so much in his life...now he want to give all the responsibilities n authorities to his sons n want to live his rest of the life like a family man...with his wife with his grand child


Vanshika: Mrs. vanshika vadhera..house wife...the best wife, mother, mother in law, friend...she is best in everything...her family is her life


Chaudaries: Mr. madan chaudhari n Mrs. Lata chaudhari...manvis parents...manvi is their only child...hence they pampered her n protect her so much...may b that's why she never learned who to handle the responsibities...madan is jweller...he runs his own jewellery n diamond business...Lata is very much protective towards manvi...she wants her daughters happiness...that's it



Rajat: Mr. rajat kapoor...he hv a 2 childrens...jatin n jeevika...jatin is 3 yrs elder that jeevika...rajats wife passed away in few months after jeevikas birth...rajat brought up his kids single handed...at the same time he managed his business too...jeevika was his fvrt...the apple of his eyes...but he is so egoistic person...n jeevika insulted him by choosing viren as her life partner...his enemies son...so couldn't tolerate this defeat n that's results he broke all sort of relationshions with jeevika...but still he loves jeevika so much...that's y his every day starts with seeing jeevikas picture...


Jatin: Mr. jatin kapoor...the elder son of rajat n brother of jeevika...he hates jeevika from his childhood as rajat loves jeevika more than him...jeevika was brilliant in every activity..hence she is always rajats pride...but jatin wasn't talented like jeevika...hence always feels jealous on her...jatin is a married man..and he have a 1 son...varun


Meera: Mrs. Meera jatin kapoor...jatins wife n 3 yrs old varuns mother...she is selfish n cunning woman...the ruler of jatins life...n jatin is just puppet of her hand...her life is around her son n money...she don't even care abt jatin...she want to live luxurious life n want to give the same to her son...she even hates jeevika



Edited by baby_yellow123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Read ur story in ur old thread, loved it.

Plz post all d parts in dis thread soon..
Update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi, baby_yellow😊,
the character sketch was amazing. eagerly waiting for ur update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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update soon nd pm me nd buddy me alsoo plss
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thnk u so much guys...i m so surprised that u ppl still remember me 😲...wow 👏 👏...i made some changes in characters so pls check that...n tom ill post old chap as well as the fresh 1 😉...hope u will like it...till then tata bye bye...c u tom 😃
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nice character sketch.
would love to read more
pm me if possible
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Ohhh yeah i knw this story...its nice...updt soon
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read this story in old thread
loved it
continue soon
waiting for the update
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haan i read this before ...pls pls update sooon

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