VIRMAN SS:||Jab Tak Tum Ho Mere Saath||chap 8 pg 16 *NEW* - Page 3

Originally posted by: virmanfan013

hey just read all the parts nd i was like omg where were u from long time i mean seriously u have written everything so well that i am even lacking of words. Wt to say yaar u made me speechless. U gave equal importance to each nd every character. The jeemen,vv bros bond, vanshika nd jeemen bond with aarav was superbly written. Aarav's bond with his bhabies specialy with manvi was very cute nd it works like chili powder when aarav tease virat regarding manvi nd it become so much fun. Aww love the scene where viren was teaching ayan to say papa nd then manvi's teasing session nd jiju sali convo was so adorable. Aarav he is such a cute nd naughty boy. Vikram papa isn't bad at heart either he is just strict bt nt cruel. Love the vadhera chaudhary bond. Aww virat love his bhai nd bhai so much that he couldn't stand if anyone say something cheap about them. I am totally loving this ff dear plz cont soon nd thanx for the scrap

Originally posted by: JESMY143VIRMAN

awesome
continue soon.
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: yushna

update soonn
it was fab
good updates
interesting story
nd do pm me

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

Wow yaar..

Just too good loved it..

Feel really sad for Jeevika..

Pleasee continue soon and thanks for the PM...

Originally posted by: rasp_berry

Awesome updt...haaa finally u r back...loved the kitchen scene...awww poor jeevika feel really bad fr her...waiting fr her dada reaction on her phone call...cont soon

Originally posted by: niki795

all the updates are awesome
loved it
continue soon
plz do pm me

Originally posted by: manvilover18

awesome story...

amazing updates...

love it..

plzzz update it quick...

and do PM me..

waiting for next update...