ASHLOK FF MY CUTIE PIE WIFE(CHAP 27-new update page 67)

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HEY GUYS HERE IS MY FIRST WORK FOR U
DEDICATED TO ALL ASHLOK LOVERS!
my first attempt as a fiction writer...so please support me
and forgive me for my mistakes...
i took it as a serious work from chapter 8
until that it was just for a fun
those chapters look so childish and immature😕
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chapter 1(prologue)
astha and shlok are married for their parents as they both love their parents a lot
3 months have passed
both have a strong unexposed love for each other but their srong ego does not allowing them a bit
shlok can never away from his wife's antics neither astha from her akdu
astha still works in shlok's office as his personal secretary 😛lol!
yes both are in strong love but confessed yet
note:pov-means point of vision(or internal thought)-iam using that word often
chapter 1 and 2
chapter 3 and 4
chapter 5 and 6
chapter 7
chapter 8
chapter 9
chapter 10
chapter 11
chapter 12
chapter 13
chapter 14
chapter 15
chapter 16
chapter 17
chapter 22
chapter 23
chapter 24
chapter 25
chapter 26
chapter 27
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READ CUTIE PIE WIFE CHAPTER 2
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please comment friends
chapter 2
astha:sir i need a leave for tomorrow?
shlok:reason?
astha:personal
shlok:oh ho mrs shlok agnihotri, if you want leave work late today
astha:ok fine agreed sir
she leaves
shlok didnt expect this
he wanted her to be with him everyday.i should do something...😉IDEA😛😛
he called astha and shreya to his cabin
shlok:see shreya astha is on leave tomorrow.you are stituted instead and astha you can hand over ur completed works to shreya
astha 😡😡😡fuming she hates shreya to the core who always oggles at shlok always wearing revealing clothes😡and shlok very well knows this
astha:my works will be completed late sir
shlok(ready to shout)but before said:shreya you may leave
she leaves'
shlok angrily looks at astha
astha:sir i may handover the works to suresh.he is also here working late today u may substitute him instead!
shlok:😡here iam the boss not you.shreya will handle it
astha:😡why you want that girl around you
shlok:none of ur business and dont shout at your boss
astha:(not ready 2 give up):iam talking to my husband😉😉LOL and i dont want any leave😡😡😡now what you will do?she leaves
shlok's pov:WHAT AN IDEA SHLOKJI👏👏
asthas pov:now what should i do ?i should buy something for his birthday day after tomorrow
PLAN A FAILED😭😭NOW PLAN B


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do show your love through words
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Nice Start of the SS My Cutie Pie Wife
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👏👏👏teaser
asthas birthday gift to shlok...
cute romance and surprises
shlok very very happy😛👏
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here is the chapter 3
PLAN B
astha is still working
shlok is abt to leave when shlok notices astha
shlok:are you not coming
astha:(ignoring him):i have work you go
shlok:what you will do fly?
astha:will catch an auto
shlok:😡holding her wrist with anger and pinning her to him :cant you learn from your experience?
astha:i...i..leave me its paining
shlok:now take your own time and i will wait in my cabin
astha least expected this
she planned to leave as soon shlok left and buy a gift and return to office.and she knows her shlok will come to pick her😉😉lol!
😭😭HER PLAN B MISERABLY FAILED
now what to do :god help me please
😉LAST AND FINAL IDEA
she went to shlok's cabin
shlok:now what?
astha smiles and goes near shlok
and playing with his shirt buttons politely asked:shlok i miss my parents badly.will u take me to my home today?please😛😛😛
shlok's pov: why sudden love,something cooking in that small head but any way says:ok fine
she pinches his cheek and said:thank you so much and👏 clapped
she leaves to arrange the files
shlok:pagal ladki😉😉😉!

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i hate it when no one responds.do support me guys more support more faster the updates👏👏👏-----------------------------------
chapter 4
they reached asthas home
avdoot welcomed them
avd:arrey beta what a surprise?
astha(pouting):i doubt whether he or me your child?
avd:he is our son only
shlok:astha dear,jealousy dont works.they love me more😉😉nee baba dont cry
astha😡😡:you go iam not coming with you😡😡go where ever you like
kalindi:arey wa stunt started and shlok beta never mind have your food
avd:(smiling):shlok you are having a tough time with her.i know
shlok:uncle your daughter is still a kid😆😆now what should i do?
astha is listening from upstairs
avd:stay here beta
astha's pov:pappa dont spoil my plan
shlok:no uncle .i have important work with papa
avd:then let her stay here today you know she is quite stubborn
shlok:fine uncle
astha:hehe😛
shlok comes to her room
astha:now what?i said you shlok iam not coming
shlok:i didnt ask you😉
astha:(caught)😳😳:then why you came?
shlok:to say goodnight
astha:what...ok good night
shlok's pov:bad night for me
😕😕
shlok:be in our home tomorrow ok?
astha:ordering! you are not boss here!
shlok:husband's order😆😆😆LOL!
astha cutely nodes
shlok:bye take care
he leaves
astha sighs in relief
she close the door and dances PLAN SUCCESS hehebut become sad😭😭😭
I MISS U MY AKDU😭😭
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Beautiful and interesting story!!!!
Thanks for sharing!!

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