ASHLOK FF MY CUTIE PIE WIFE(CHAP 27-new update page 67)

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kirthiii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

hi... amazing work till now... please update soon and please give us longer updates... can't wait... 😉

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ANAM

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

nice update cant wait for next part...😳

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rafif

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

PLS GIVE A LONG UPDATE DEAR AND UPDATE SOON😊 BY THE WAY IT WAS AWESOME

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LuvStrk-001

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Beautiful update!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Plzz continue and thanks for sharing!!!!!!!!!!!

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Ishita Irani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Awesome update dear
Pls cont soon and a long one

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lechu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

frienda thanks for all comments.love u all.sorry 4 short updates.so here is the much longer updates.please comment.criticism are

equally welcomed

chapter 7

astha murmurs:akdu he tum bada akdu

shlok:did you said something
astha:(pouts):nothing fine sir

shlok's pov:don't tempt me my astha😲😲!god give me control!!!!!!😉😉

astha get seated besides shlok and starts his works

shlok is admiring his doll now and then

astha's pov:i will never fail after all iam MRS.SHLOK AGNIHOTRI😉😉

shlok's pov :i feel like hugging her.have no control any more.in this situation if i hug her god she will slap me sure!!!😕😕

what to do?

IDEA!but its 😕quite low,but i will do anything GOD MAKE IT WORK

shlok:astha

astha:hmmm...

shlok:can you please get me old files no 234987 and 234446 from the storeroom

you can refer the catalog and easily locate it

astha:ok...fine

all the staffs have left for lunch to the mess

so shlok have no worries about men staring at her

👏👏

astha leaves

she says:this khadoos will never allow me to have food today...iam hungry

astha reaches the storeroom

its old room and full of her enemies(FRIENDS U MIGHT HAVE GOT IT)

shlok follows her silently
shlok's pov:1...2...3...ASTHA SCREAM

astha sees all the lizards and spiders and sreams her lungs out

AHAAA...

AHAAA...AHAAA

she sees shlok and hugs him and screams

ahaaa...ahaaa

shlok...shlok...see...spider...lizard...

just then a rat falls over her leg AHAAA ...AHAAA

she hugs shlok very very tight and screams

shlok had a victorious smile😆lol!!!!!!!!!

shlok too hugs her tight 😳lol!

shlok:astha!they are silly creatures ...they wont eat you

he could feel astha gasping

shlok:iam with you dont worry!!!!!and cups her face and nods

astha still piercing him tight😳😳

shlok's pov:dont do this to me

astha 😳aware of the situations slowly pulls away

shlok:come have your lunch.iwill ask someone else to find it

astha'spov:he could have done it earlier😡

they leaves

she moves out for lunch

shlok feels bad😕😕😕:what have i done,she is this much angry!!😲😲

astha pulls out her note pad

she ticked

made him miss her
made him possessive...next step little dangerous
make him panic...and worried

rest step will be according to your performance astha.be brave!

astha silently had her lunch fastly

then she works on her reports moving to his cabin

shlok was not there

she calls somebody and gives some directions

she finishes the reports and placed it on his table

then she writes a letter

TO MR SHLOK,

FROM UR PUPPET WIFE

today i feel worst..upset all because of you shlok

i feel pathetic,lonely

u only care for money and fame .you cant love your wife.in this 6 months of our marriage,i didnt heard the word LOVE from you.you are considering me as a robot.i feel exhausted and miserable today .so iam going to relieve my pains...by going way

she left from there

...hours passed shlok is in along meeting

its 6.30pm.meeting dispersed

then mangala came running

sir,did you see astha .i was looking for her.she is no where here

shlok:you looked every where...i mean...under tables..😆😆..inside cupboards...😆😆.behind curtains..😛😃...

dont worry.she might have done some mischief and will be hiding.i will find her

mangala nodded

shlok came to his cabin and searched saying:astha enough...if you come on your own punishment will be less.otherwise you know me na

astha...astha...enough come out

just then saw the paper.he read it and squeezed it:NO...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DOES SHE MEAN...NO!!!!!!!!!!!!

he stood like a statue.shocked...the man who never cried for anyone has tears in his eyes

...

Edited by LECHU123 - 11 years ago

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lechu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

please speak up

waitng 4 ur comments

Edited by LECHU123 - 11 years ago

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Megha (Vishav Kirti) Sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Oh buddy!! This is really an amazing piece of work!

I loved each and every update, each and every bit of the SS.

Believe me, it's amazingly awesome!

I loved Aastha's plan to make Shlok confess!!

I am waiting for the next part.

Continue soon!

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Megha (Vishav Kirti) Sharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: LECHU123
please speak up
waitng 4 ur comments
urs lechu123

So it's me, first to comment!!!🥳🥳🥳🥳

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Ishita Irani

@IshitaIrani

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Nice idea astha
Hope her plan doesn't backfires her
Cont soon dear
Waiting

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