ASHLOK FF MY CUTIE PIE WIFE(CHAP 27-new update page 67) - Page 11

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Nice concept,looking forward too reading more
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lovely...lovely...lovely...
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hai friends here is the new chapter...
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thanks a lot my friends for your support!!!!!!!

CHAPTER-13
there comes the girl...astha hate the most...
SHREYA ...with her skin exposing get up
she came to shlok's desk and purposefully slipped and get hold of shlok
astha is gritting her teeth
shlok's pov:family spoiler!!!
shlok shouted:dont you have eyes shreya!what you want now?
shreya:sorry sir...here is the reports!!!
shlok got one idea to reduce astha's anger
shlok:iam quite busy now!you may go to astha
shreya frowned and came near astha
shreya:mam
astha:yes...
shreya showed the reports
shlok slowly moved out of the cabin
astha:before this let me ask you something.are you from such a poor family who cannot afford to buy enough cloth material for you!!
shreya:why mam!
astha:see yourself girl!is this the way to come to an office?
shreya:mam as a grown up girl i have full freedom to wear what i wish.she shot back
astha:at your home not here!understood?
and the reports rewrite it?and dont act smart!!
you purposefully created a scene here
shreya:mam what i had done to punish me like this?
astha:dont think iam a fool!you acted the slipping scene right?
shreya:mam no mam it was by mistake!she frowned
astha: i told you dont act smart!the floor is neither slippery nor smooth and you are in your flat heels
shreya became angry as all her plans shot back to herself!!!!
shreya:mam you are jealous and you have no trust over your husband
THAK!!!!!
shreya stood rubbing her cheek
her pov:i will teach you a lesson!mind it!
(note:there is a hidden mystery about this character.dont take her as silly.she is extra dangerous!!i will reveal her intentions in coming parts)
astha:get lost!!!!!!!she shouted!
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shlok was talking to mangala
there came shreya holding her cheek!
no one enquired as all hated her due to her arrogant behaviour.infact all had a smile
shlok's pov:got it!!my wife is so fast!you deserve it
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its noon time ...
in a dark corner shreya is calling someone...
shreya:i cant no longer work here!that witch slapped me today!!!!
the other person on the phone:dont mind ...i will offer you more money.spoil their relation...get her out of shlok's life!...and
you are the most benefitted...you know that...you will be his future wife
shreya had a evil smile
shreya:i will try my best!!i will break her heart!sure trust me...
the:good!i will call you back...bye
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evening...
shlok and astha in the car
shlok:my girl is still angry at me?
astha :why should i be angry at you.it wasnot your problem!that ugly crap spoiled my day!
shlok:so here am to bring my astha's mood back
astha:where are we going?
shlok:surprise?????
astha:hmm?she faked anger
shlok:you look more beautiful now my angry bird!!!
he said looking into the mirror!
astha:stop flirting...and look at the road
shlok laughed:so you were looking at me.thank god!
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he parked his car by a beach like place
astha:why here
shlok:wait and watch?
he opened the door and led astha to the beach
astha:why no one around?????
shlok didnt answer
astha was shocked by the sight

there stood a beautiful house
astha:beautiful!!!
shlok:so my wifey liked it!he asked hugging her
astha:i loved it.she clapped and jumped
shlok:can you please behave as grown up
astha pouted
shlok:can we move now!
astha:beach house right?why no people around?
shlok:come on i will tell you
they moved inside
astha was so pleased by its beauty!
shlok hugged her from behind
shlok:so my angry bird is happy now!
astha turned to him and kissed him
and said:thank you shlok for taking me here
this place is so beautiful,peaceful...and...
shlok:romantic right?
astha:hmm...
they sat on a couch
astha rested her head on shlok's shoulders
they felt so peaceful...
astha:shlok...you know something...
shlok:hmm...
astha:i always dreamt of a place like this...with me and...my
shlok:my...
astha:my...prince charming
shlok:sorry from where will i get a prince?
astha poked him:you are my prince
shlok:lie...!
astha:no...true shlok...iam blessed to have you in my life?
shlok:stop it princess...order from your prince
they both laughed
astha:do take me here once a while
shlok:we can come here everyday,any time
astha:ha...this is not our private property
shlok:yes it is!!!!
astha:ha?what?are you mad?
shlok:astha...i bought this house for us?
there came the next shock for astha!!!!!!!
shlok:astha...astha...
he shook her
shlok gave her a peck
astha:i will not talk to you.you never told me before...
shlok:surprises are never disclosed before
astha:akdu...akdu...akdu
shlok hugged her cutely
shlok:yours only akdu...and you my mrs.akdu
astha smiled
shlok:now happy
astha:hmm...very happy.i love you
shlok:now give your akdu a strong kiss !
astha kissed on his lips
soon it became a passionate kiss
and they spent their beautiful night there...in each others arms
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two haunty red eyes are watching them from a distance...
soon those eyes disappeared into the dark
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Edited by LECHU123 - 11 years ago
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Wow.this was beautiful..so there will be a twist in the tale??????
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Evil shreya...
Dont't like her...
Sholok is very good husband...
And Aastha is realy cute wife...
Beautiful updet...
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Originally posted by: jeenia123

Wow.this was beautiful..so there will be a twist in the tale??????

thanks dear...yaa...iam thinking on it
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Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

Evil shreya...
Dont't like her...
Sholok is very good husband...
And Aastha is realy cute wife...
Beautiful updet...

thanks dear!!
Edited by LECHU123 - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: LECHU123

thanks dear...yaa...iam thinking on it

I think this shreya must have been planted by NA or Abhay. lets see..
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la la la iam a groupbie now🥳
🥳🤗thanks a lot for all your support
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CHAPTER-14
morning...
shlok woke up by the cool breeze stroking his hair
he looked at astha his angel.she really looked like an angel
he slowly got up without disturbing her
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astha:ahaaa...aha...help me...ahaa
poor astha.she was hell shocked to find herself in new surroundings!!
shlok ran to the room panicked...
shlok:astha...what happened...
astha came running and hugged him
shlok:astha...are you alright?
astha:hmmm...sorry...i thought someone kidnapped me?
shlok broke into a loud laughter!!!!!
shlok:dont worry!even if someone kidnap you they will send you back unable to bare your scream...even cloth in your mouth dont work!!
astha:i was really scared...you left me alone...whats the time...
shlok:about 8
astha was about to scream
shlok closed her mouth
shlok:dont scream again...sunday!
astha sighed
shlok:so come princess...have your breakfast!
astha:shlok...you...you made breakfast
shlok:no...iam not that cruel...i bought it from nearby...restaurant
astha sighed
she got freshened up
both had their breakfast
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they reached agnihotri mansion
they heard a male sound:surprise!!!!!!!!
(before this let me introduce some characters to you
niranjan agnihotri:kind,loving dad of shlok.he loves astha a lot like his own daughter as she is his best friend's daughter.astha calls him babuji!
anjali:shlok's stepmother,rude and selfishness personified,hates astha to the core
HERE SHLOK IS THE ONE AND ONLY SON OF NA
but has a loving elder sister priya.she is a widow and leaves with them.she has a cute 4 year daughter kavya)
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there astha and shlok was welcomed by priya,NA and kavya
kavya:mami...
astha:arrey where were you my doll?
kavya:mami...see my new dress
astha:nice...mami has a surprise...come to my room...after sometime...ok
kavya:hmm.muah!
shlok:why didnt you call me pappa!i would have come to pick you
NA:I wanted to give a sudden surprise!
i called here yesteday and maid told me you to went out and will beback today.so i made a small plan thats all!
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they all came inside.astha didnt find anjali anywhere.priya noticed this and whisperd
priya:babi,hitler dadi want to spend sometime in her home.she is still in mumbai!
astha sighed
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astha:shlok you go and change .i have some secret talk with babuji!
NA laughed
NA:did shlok did any mischeif!astha beta!
shlok:ha...ha...babuji ka bachi...pappa i doubt you two friends exchanged your children
shlok smiled at kavya
kavya:mamu smiling ...ha i like it...she jumped
shlok:so come we can play.can we
shlok picked kavya
all were surprised watching new shlok!
he and playing!!!!!!!!
priya was in utter shock
astha closed her mouth.
astha:more shocks awaiting
kavya:mamu ...ilove you.muah!
shlok:i love you too!
they moved upstairs!!!!!!
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astha narrated the whole story to priya and NA .THEY STOOD SHOCKED!!!!!!!!!







Edited by LECHU123 - 12 years ago

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