ASHLOK FF MY CUTIE PIE WIFE(CHAP 27-new update page 67) - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
so cute story . love the silly fights between ashlok . continue soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update, can't wait to read more

Edited by rbb1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Nice update 👏

Please continue n pm me when you update next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
hai friends here is the chapter 5
do comment please!!!!!!!!!
astha is thinking what to gift her akdu
she didnt strike any idea its already late night
SHLOK'S ROOM
shlok is staring at asthas photo and asking:
my cutie pie is angry with me...he can't sleep
come home soon!!
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astha screams 👏👏IDEA!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏
thank god room is sound proof!
but her pov:how can you do this astha.what if he is not loving you like you do?😡😡😡NO...!!!!!!!!!!!!
she suddenly takes her diary and writes
STEPS TO MAKE SHLOK REVEAL HIS FEELING FOR ASTHA!😆😆LOL!
next day she comes to office late as she had to make arrangements for shlok's surprise
shlok was talking on his phone and sees astha and froze😲😲😲ASTHA!...he whispers open mouthed
astha comes in this saree
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I WANT U TO GUESS WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?
I WILL UPDATE SOON
MY FRIENDS I CANT PM PLEASE FORGIVE
Edited by LECHU123 - 12 years ago
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DO READ AND COMMENT PLEASE!!!!!!!!
Edited by LECHU123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Very Nice Update
Waiting for the next part
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friends iam going to end this ss soon if u r not responding.dont make me disappointed-------------------
chapter 6
shlok's pov:how can one look hot and cute at the same time.he smiles😉
all the male staffs are eyeing at astha from corners😡😡😡
shlok notices this 😡😡😡and shouts :
where are you all people staring at? do concentrate on your work
astha ignores shlok and walks into his cabin
to take her files
shlok follows her.shlok silently closes the door.astha is searching something...
shlok grabs astha by the waist and pins her to him.they share an eyelock.
shlok:😡😡what the hell are you wearing
ASTHA😡😡
astha:cant you see sir, saree! and leave me
shlok:why this saree?😡gritting his teeth dammit!its too much revealing are you blind?
astha pulls away from him and says with lot of attitude:sir,its my wish what i wear
shlok:😡😡astha,why morning itself you pull my nerves
astha:sir,what i had done?😲you have any problem when other female staff wear clothes worser than this!
shlok:stop your drama😡😡!and iam talking to my wife and not staff stop your "sir"
astha :😡😡shlok,what is wrong with you?
shlok:i dont like men staring at you 😡😡dammit!
astha:i dont care.
shlok:you should😡😡
astha:why?
shlok:because iam your husband😡
astha:you cant make me a puppet shlok.you are a husband with no love for his wife.you are always ordering me everything.to act,to work everyrhing to your wish
😭😭she cries and leaves
shlok is badly hurt:does she mean i dont love her.astha..no
astha's pov:chill astha.path to success is always harder!
shlok's pov:i will not spare you my girl!
he calls astha
shlok:he takes a file and gives her.and says:you should rewrite this full report and submit it before evening
astha:😭😡but sir
shlok:and you are working from my cabin the whole day(so that other men not stare at her)
astha:😡shlok you are taking revenge!
shlok:iam talking to my staff and this is my order


Edited by LECHU123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow nice update, can't wait to read the part when he tells her that he loves her

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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Hey bring up the conffesion soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
loving your story!!!! It would be nice if both of them are trying to get the other say it!!! Just a thought.

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