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CHAPTER 8
shlok is searching for astha like a mad man
he searched almost in every corner of the city...his men is doing enquiries.but not any clue...
its almost 10pm...almost 3 hour after astha is missing he felt...breathless... exhausted...his eyes are blood red due to tears .astha come to me.if you want kill me.but never leave me like this astha.i love you more than anything in this world astha.you are my world astha.come to me
he cuursed himself for his rudeness,his ego...he is crying his heart out...screaming ASTHA...ASTHA
suddenly a flashback came to him as if send by the god
flashback
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ashlok's room
shlok:leave me alone astha(he shouted)
astha:shlok,if you continue shout like this i will leave from here now
shlok:where u will go?
astha:i...i...yes i will go the PEOPLE'S GARDEN and spend the whole night there...BEWARE!!!!!
flash back ends
shlok remembers astha always praising that place:it is the most safest place in the city...for any girl to spend her time with peace
shlok fled his car at high speed to people's park.the park is still active with people here and there. shlok is running like a mad man.he looked in the main block,by the waterfalls,by the garden,play area but no sign of her
he sat by the pool defeated...he felt like a lifeless man...souless man...
now astha is sitting in acorner of the pool(far from shlok)
she is weeping bitterly saying:astha he will not turn up...all your plans are going to be in vain.he never cares for you.he can never love youu. you are the culprit astha.you never showed your love to him.you failed astha...U MISERABLY FAILED.she cried bitterly
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shlok is sitting in a bench his head resting in the side
he is dreaming of astha...
her smile ...her cute pouting...her jokes...their last hug in the storeroom...slowly astha is moving away from him to the darkness...his vision became blurr...
he screamed...NO...NO...astha dont leave me ...astha...he woke up
he heard a faint sound...a weeping like sound
he looked every where but could not find the source...he stood up and walked
it seemed something is pulling towards that sound...he walked slowly towards the sound...it became...closer...closer a girl in yellow churidar caught his attention
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CHAPTER 9
shlok slowly approaches the girl in yellow churidar.she had her head covered by her dupatta.her head is resting on her knees and face is not visible to shlok.
shlok pats her on the shoulder and says:hey girl what are you doing in this late night
astha feeling a sudden but familiar voice looks up(yes she is none other than astha.she had changed from her seducing saree to churidar which she hided in her bag as she felt quite uncomfortable in it,before leaving shlok's cabin)
shlok's emotions is impossible to express through words.he screamed astha!!!!!! and hugged her with all his strength.he confessed between his sobs:astha,how dare you leave me like this.how dare you say that i did not love you!infact i had never loved anyone in my life like you.i had never cared for anything more than you.i had never cried for anyone in my life other than you!YOU ALWAYS ACCUSED ME SAYING THAT IAM A HEARTLESS MAN.YES ASTHA! IAM HEARTLESS YOU KNOW WHY MY HEART BELONGS TO YOU.IT DOES NOT BELONGS TO ME!!
yes "I LOVE YOU ASTHA"i love you more than my life.i cannot live without you astha!
he burst into tears.astha had the biggest shock of her life.she stood dumb.she tried to say something but stood still in the warmth of shlok's embrace hugging him
---------------------------------------------------------here unexpectedly a twist had happen to astha's planning .yes something beyond her planning.she never expected shlok to confess soon.her diary had some more unticked steps still to make him confess
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BUT GOD IS THE GREATEST PLANNER.
astha's bappa had planned something for astha
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flashback(the twist)
astha's letter
TO MR SHLOK,
FROM UR PUPPET WIFE
today i feel worst..upset all because of you shlok
i feel pathetic,lonely
u only care for money and fame .you cant love your wife.in this 6 months of our marriage,i didnt heard the word LOVE from you.you are considering me as a robot.i feel exhausted and miserable today .so iam going to relieve my pains...by going way
SHLOK OUT OF HIS SHOCK HAD FORGOT TO TURN THE PAGE
to spend some time alone in my favourite park.
do not come to take me back until and unless you realise your mistake.
if you sincerely regret iam ready to forgive you
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AND SHLOK MISUNDERSTOOD THAT SHE LEFT HIM FOR EVER.(what a plan bappa)
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flash back ends
astha stood frozen as if she is in a dream.she came back back to reality by shlok's tears wetting her shoulders.she gained some courage and spoke:shlok...i...left ...a...letter
shlok(still not ready to leave her from his hug)
spoke:how dare you astha to go away from me for ever.how can you do that?and forget your bloody letter!!
things became some what clear to astha now
he did not turn the page!!!!she cursed herself for hurting this innocent soul.shlok's shirt is almost drenched with her tears
she said in between her sobs:iam sorry shlok for hurting you so much.i...i...i...she stammered.she started kissing shlok in both his cheeks.a slight smile emerged in shlok's lips.astha shyly spoke...I LOVE YOU SHLOK!
before shlok could look at her face or say something she pressed his lips with hers and said:HAPPY BIRTHDAY SHLOK!!!!!!!!!!!
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precap:most sweet and romantic ashlok moments
Edited by LECHU123 - 11 years ago
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