New Arhi SS: 'Five Days' Chp 4 Now UPDATED COMPLETED - Page 2

Originally posted by: Vallon

OMG! So emotional at first chap itself! Khushi is a cancer patient! 5 freaking more days to live! Why? Her parents r still alive! I love this phrase 'She wrapped her arms around me tight. 'Let's be scared together and not alone.' Pulling myself from her I looked at her. 'Together,' I whispered the promise we both knew will be the most difficult phase of our lives.' Cause no one should be alone during hurdle times, we all need someone that can comfort us atleast in a small amount! I love how you change the key scene! The way you describe ASR made me feel I'm khushi thorn! Ehehehe! I don't like much sad story of ARSHI but then there is something about your writings which make the reader really feel the pain from your words. The depth of pain lies in your words, the way you write about it! Well illustrate! Can you like post all the chapters?

PS: Were you that depress when you wrote it?

Originally posted by: mishti_17

Im scared, no doubt I am.. 😒 5 days... 🥺 How heartbreaking can it be? 🥺 Why is life so cruel? But she did meet Arnav... And Yosh, what a beautiful way to put that scene like this here... So is he her guardian angel?? Im so hoping that he is.. And I believe you.. Was almost scared before I read your note so YEAH, I will stick around.. 😆