New Arhi SS: 'Five Days' Chp 4 Now UPDATED COMPLETED

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Durga

@mrk-1

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

nice start .. loved it .. do continue soon ..

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Yoshi...

I believe in you...

U won;t let my Khushi die...

Pls... U've full 5 daya...

Pls,do something ...

Arhi have such a strong effect on each other..

I f Khushi is mesmerized by his attractive personality...

Arnav ,too ,is drawn towards Khushi...

I m patiently waiting for INNOCENCE...

But I loved it,too !!!!

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Piyali

@love.piyali

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Lovely update dear...jus wow...plz PM me whenever you update...

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zayana khan

@zayana123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

That was beautiful dear...

really love it...

eagerly waiting 4 the next part...😃

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

A new short story, I'm excited to read further and especially a story with a happy ending.

The first update was amazing, yet quite sad and heart breaking.

So poor Khushi has got a tumour and has been told she only has 5 days left.

Loved the way Khushi was mesmerised by Arnav, you described him beautifully.

The update was a brilliant read and written exceptionally well.

Eagerly waiting for the next part,

Thanks for the PM xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago

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Thanushiya

@ThanuAditya

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

OMG OMG Wat a Brilliant start dear ...

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

aww its hauntingly beautiful n unique!

waiting to know the rest..

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

what five days to live
man thats well what can i say
but then what else can she do
hmmm that was sad news
so seems she met arnie
and what a meeting that was
four more days to go
lets see what it brings us
cheers for pm

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Swati Singhal

@swatim318

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

woowww what a start... intriguing..👏

but this story has only 4 chapters... and khushi has just 5 days..😲😕

oh god... whats gonna happen..

i m soo excited to know further...

thanks for pm..