New Arhi SS: 'Five Days' Chp 4 Now UPDATED COMPLETED - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
nice start .. loved it .. do continue soon ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Awesome Scrap for Orkut
Yoshi...

I believe in you...
U won;t let my Khushi die...

Pls... U've full 5 daya...
Pls,do something ...

Arhi have such a strong effect on each other..
I f Khushi is mesmerized by his attractive personality...
Arnav ,too ,is drawn towards Khushi...

I m patiently waiting for INNOCENCE...
But I loved it,too !!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Lovely update dear...jus wow...plz PM me whenever you update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
That was beautiful dear...
really love it...
eagerly waiting 4 the next part...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
A new short story, I'm excited to read further and especially a story with a happy ending.

The first update was amazing, yet quite sad and heart breaking.

So poor Khushi has got a tumour and has been told she only has 5 days left.

Loved the way Khushi was mesmerised by Arnav, you described him beautifully.

The update was a brilliant read and written exceptionally well.

Eagerly waiting for the next part,

Thanks for the PM xx





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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
OMG OMG Wat a Brilliant start dear ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
aww its hauntingly beautiful n unique!
waiting to know the rest..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
what five days to live
man thats well what can i say
but then what else can she do
hmmm that was sad news
so seems she met arnie
and what a meeting that was
four more days to go
lets see what it brings us
cheers for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
woowww what a start... intriguing..👏

but this story has only 4 chapters... and khushi has just 5 days..😲😕

oh god... whats gonna happen..

i m soo excited to know further...

thanks for pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Loved the first part.
Let's see what happens in her last five days.

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