New Arhi SS: 'Five Days' Chp 4 Now UPDATED COMPLETED - Page 18

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barbiebala

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome story

i traveled with the characters

excellent way of writing

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ayu_tripathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

this is such a beautiful story..!!😊😊

just loved it..what imagination ya..!!

loved the way the story unfolds! wonderfully written..and honestly a great lesson to learn!!

hats off to you👏👏👏👏👏👏

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Anu567

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Posted: 11 years ago

Dal...such a beautiful story and so well written...still shivering after reading it...haunting in its power and the feelings it evokes. Arnav and Khushi in an alternative universe...wow! Thank you for that narration!

Anupama

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kondhili

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Posted: 11 years ago

What vivid imagination and such a well written story.

It kept me on the hook and i couldn't rest till i had read all the 4 chapters in one go

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Mirabell

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Posted: 10 years ago

Capricious serendipity brought me to this story and what a treat it was. Everything about it was all new and old at the same time. The newness of the plot, the twists made it difficult to stop. But the message is as old as time itself.

What a gifted writer you are! It was truly a pleasure.. Thank you for all the gifts you come bearing with your words and stories.

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1chilly

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Posted: 10 years ago

What an unusually lovely piece!

For this is surely a work of art.

Loved the story you weaved around Arnav and Khushi and their loss.

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 10 years ago

loved reading it once again

Edited by Arjuhisis - 10 years ago

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Varsha Dutt

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Posted: 10 years ago

Amazing SS...
interesting concept... loved it 😊

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luvbug

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Posted: 10 years ago

oh wow tht was an awesome ss...loved ur writing style :)

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HumaParinda

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Posted: 10 years ago

What an amazing story and how superbly told. Thank you for sharing, this was not only a treat to heart, but a fantastic treat to my mind as well. 😊

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