New Arhi SS: 'Five Days' Chp 4 Now UPDATED COMPLETED

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

imagination. creativty. talent.

U have lot of them ..

Do I need to say more ?

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Dalmuthuya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: ...Ashley
imagination. creativty. talent.
U have lot of them ..

Do I need to say more ?

Ohmygod. thank you.. wow. thank you.

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Tina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#153

doll I'm here finally😳

ch 1: the opening scene gave me goosebumps, their conversation, the foreboding air, and Khushi's description.. Felt as if I was seeing it play out before my eyes. Then the flashback, I'm glad she and her mom are together, that's hugely important😃 Ahh the ending and when she ran away was noteworthy too, i sense a connection😉 *off to part 2*

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Tina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#154

ch 2: this one was all about contrasts.. faith and uncertainty, life and death, hope and loss..

loved ArHi's conversation, it was real and just right. I don't blame Khushi for not believing in miracles, but now she has Arnav too in her life. And that changes things, doesn't it?😳

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moomin4455

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Posted: 11 years ago

#155

Exquisite is all I can say. The whole premise of only having a few days to live...to finding out that you have your whole life and that you have the strength to overcome tragedy because you are loved was beautifully portrayed.

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Tina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#156

Ch 3: what was that?!!!!! 😲 oh my it was my fav chapter so far but the next one could prove me totally wrong. This was truly heart wrenching, beautiful, and simply poetic. It reminded me of how i felt while reading Harry and Dumbledore's last conversation at King's Cross.. that same palpable reaction.. Loved their conversation.. across timelines, in different worlds, or anywhere for that matter, Arshi will always have that connection. So her trust in him rang true. amazingly well done doll 👏

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Tina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#157

Ch 4: Ahh that opening HP quote! So I wasn't just imagining that connection as I read the last ch 😛 Wow, loved the awakening in this finale. It wasn't just Khushi waking up from a dream, but also to life and love and hope once more.. a world of possibilities. *goosebumps are back* Beautiful doll. This was a story with the perfect blend of suspense, intellect, love, and drama. Simply put: I loved it. Very, very much. Muah! I know ur not a fan of hugs, but sending u one anyway 🤗

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Nutcase

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Posted: 11 years ago

#158

"You know that severe chest pain you feel when the things you've bottled up begins to resurface. Then you begin to cry without understanding what exactly you're shedding tears for. All your beliefs in second chances disappears in to thin air. Nothing seems to make sense. We begin to drown ourselves in to unwanted solutions to numb such feelings. Strange emotions withholds your soul trapping you in its cage. Before we realize the danger that's on our way it's too late. Life itself collapses in to ashes"---- Loved these line..beautifully scripted the emotions all humans feel at a point of their life..

"You do realize by the time it sinks in I will be dead. How can you forget that you're not the only person who is going through this pain. Have you ever realized the fear I feel for the upcoming horror. If you haven't realized, mom I am not exactly an expert when it comes to death. So if you want to drown in your pain all alone go right ahead, but when the time comes and it sinks in I will be long gone.' "--- again, the fear, the pain, the loneliness, the need to reassured, comforted all shine through...in anger we blurt out things which we might regret later but those words always holds bitter truth in them!

"Winds swishing by, leaves raining down from trees; living things all coming to a graceful end. Who would have thought that the season of death would take place with a radiant twist."--- I have never thought of Autumn in this POV...I was always enchanted by the beauty of Autumn...but never realised it as the season of death

"'There is nothing solid in life, Khushi. Every moment, every day of every second is important for we do not know when our time will come.' Arnav eyes strained forward in to the distance. 'And by the time we do realize when it has come there will be nothing we can do,' I added quietly."--- very wise words..

Memories- miracles- faith----Felt strong similarity to SRK of KHNH :-) That man in that movie was awesome...now I await to see how Arnav can save Khushi...

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Nutcase

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Posted: 11 years ago

#159

When I started to read the 3rd chapter, I felt it very weird...I mean he can't save a person who has cancer and is on the verge of death...its not practical and its impossible...but towards the end...:-) seriously man! this is one of the best...so its a dream???

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Nutcase

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Posted: 11 years ago

#160

Do you know, that feeling when someone informs, you of some sudden news and you cannot believe what you have heard so your entire brain freezes for a second. Then when your brain begins to gain life again, some how you're pulled back in to a trance of hallucinations. Reality and fantasy becomes one, confusing your being in to believing that you have lost your sanity. ---again a wonderful scripting of a real feeling!

"when you're a writer, ' he began, 'you are the god. The control is in your hands. You are given the opportunity to create life or end it. Characters are born and they become real to the reader. Once the book is opened, they enter your world. No matter how hard they try, they cannot change anything, because it is your rules. Each word that is been sketched in, is your thoughts, your beliefs and your ideas. Except they are presented through the character's mind.'--- wow!!! beautifully written concept!

"The mind is a fascinating place, Khushi. It has the ability explore worlds you have never entered. There is power within the mind. But you know what is more powerful; your heart. Without the help of the heart the mind isn't at its most powerful. The heart is crying out to you. Trying to bring you back to reality. Right now you're only using your mind, but this cannot continue. The heart needs to be merged with your mind. Emotions needs to be evoked in to your system.'"

Also this

" Life is unexpected and we have to be ready for all- it is impossible, but that is why we have loved ones. Regardless of what the world might say we are never alone. If we reach out, there are people waiting to reach back. You just have to let them. There is no such thing as second chances when we are called, but there are second chances while we are alive. We can experience them all when we are adamant to do so. Those are miracles, Khushi.'

Plus this

"Life is like a river. You don't know where you might land. Either a water fall comes ahead or just another twist in the route. We do not have the power to control the currents. And that is okay, because even at times when we are drowning, we can still call out to the people we love. In the end love is the second chance we can give ourselves."--- am totally goner! how you manage to write so philosophically while explaining the meaning so simply?

the heartbeats, manaat ki key wonderfuly woven into the story line!

Man! this is one of the mindblowing stories I have ever read!! I am too overwhelmed to explain what I felt while I read...Good work dear!!