New Arhi SS: 'Five Days' Chp 4 Now UPDATED COMPLETED

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nnhk

@nnhk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

brilliantly written
we go through so much in our lives and whenever something bad happens we shut down and just grieve for ourselves not thinking about others who have also been effected by it.

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Sidda

@Sidda8

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

Beautiful update. Arnav's love was able to win back Khushi even in her dreams. She realized that life is too short to weep over miseries for too long. One must make the best of everyday.

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shutter

@shutter

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

The stories u write, with the strong underlying message!!!!!!!

Enough to move even a dead man about to die to think about the repercussions of his death!!!!!!!

*Speechless*

That is what i am left with after reading your stories!!!!!!!

Beautifully and amazingly written a very difficult theme!!!!!!

👍🏼

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Sarita

@sarita_barun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Wow... when i started reading the last part, i didnt expect it to end like this.
I'm surprised and blown away.
The way you project emotions and the way the scenes just flows naturally is really mind boggling.
Loved it.

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

Arnav made her realize what she had to do, what she always wanted to do... And in the end he succeeded.. Succeeded to bring her back, to face the pain together along with him.. Loss of a close person is a difficult thing to deal with.. But for Khushi , Arnav is there for her with her..

Nice ending Yosh.. Thank you for this beautiful story...

Edited by mishti_17 - 11 years ago

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Jenna

@LondonChick

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

That was beautiful
I dont know what to say. I am speechless

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saradagandu

@saradagandu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#147

U write with such an aesthetic sense that there is so much of beauty in it stories ,the one is one of the best ,good story line , and the way u write adds to its beauty