the day i fell for you..arhi os

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THE DAY I FELL FOR YOU...❤️

Twenty years ago this was the most happiest day of my life, what my ears have been waiting of years have been finally gifted and blessed. Blessed with the words of love. The magical words " I love you". They are way too light on your tongue but only my man knew its weight age.My man...only MINE...


Arnav and I met through a common friend in a party and hit off as a pair immediately. Attraction followed by concern and inseparable bond. I was a hopeless romantic; he barely knew what that meant. I was traditional, he did not value them. We fought all odds together. Cleared every mess of our pasts.


His life was too overpowered by the demons of his yesterday and mine was too dark. But eventually our love for each other settled all scorers with troubles. Well everything had to be done the ASR way. Khushi's thoughts were interrupted by arnav's manly hold over her waist. Oh how much she loved this feeling. It was past twelve and he whispered in her ear "happy 18th anniversary wifey". With teary eyes she turned to him and pulled for a kiss.


It was not just a kiss it was her passion for him. He kissed away her tear and held her in his embrace for quite a time. Breaking the beautiful silence suddenly he asked "what does my love for you mean khushi?" initially startled, she inhaled deeply and settled herself on his lap comfortably and began ...

"at the first sight I saw energy of the sun in your eyes but the next moment I saw the beauty, beauty of the light the moon creates. So soothing and calm. Calm. But what kind of calmness? The one before the storm or the one after it. A calm of despair or tension.


Not being able to figure that out my eye move shamelessly towards your lips. Perfectly shaped, thin and delectable." she teased earning a smile.


" I wondered if those were the reason of your diabetes. But they never parted to utter those magical verses. Never uttered those words I wanted to hear. I knew your love for me was unconditional, still is, but the urge to listen you speak love to me was killing me. " she sensed guilt covering his eyes and she kissed it away.


"I wished so bad that you'll tell me that you loved me. I waited for that moment to come. We were under the stars, with candles around us. Everything was so romantic. I waited for the magic to happen but you simply asked whether I was happy. The question you asked held a million other questions with it. I realized your insecurities with your self. I knew you felt us part in some or the other way. I knew you were ashamed of your inability of speaking your heart out. But I knew better than that.


When you asked me whether I was happy with all the love in my heart I said that I was ecstatic. What I saw then made me forget what I wished for. For you gave me one of those special reserved smiles. The one meant for me. I looked into your eyes again. I saw triumph in them I saw peace. I found peace. I allowed myself to drown into your mirrors and when I did so I found myself at peace. I knew I made peace with myself. I've finally made peace with your silence which I found torturous at times. My brain called truce to my heart. The conflict between them topped. My heart beat normally again except it was beating for you as well. And without a doubt I devoured your delicacy, your perfection. Not for the need of my desires or yours. Not because I was bound to do it. I did it for I was overwhelmed in a new way. A sort of way which was as if I was witnessing a miracle. But I was wrong. This was more. I was not witnessing a miracle I was making one. I was making you fall for me all over again. Against all the odds , against the hatred, against the pain, the anguish, the past and the pains. And when your lips found mine I found home. i knew I was finally where I belonged, In your embrace. The feel of your lips upon mine made me feel divine.


I found myself floating. It was like I was set free, unchained and entangled. I was rescued from my own insecurities, from my own demons, from my own pain. I decided that moment that if I ever be in pain again, they'll be because I will be sharing yours. If I ever be happy, that will be because your face will be the first thing I will be seeing every morning and the last thing at night. "...by the time khushi completed he had tears in his eyes. Tears of love and happiness. He carried her in his arms ever so gently and made her stand under the stars, again. she continued " I know now what love actually is. I feel it now. To fall in love you don't need to hear those magical words. You just need to fall. Hopelessly, helplessly, honestly and happily for it cannot be enforced. To fall in love you just need to believe. For love I the closest thing to believe next to being magical. So surreal, yet so happening. And the best part is that we fell Arnav, we fell in love." He was speechless.


Aryan singh Raizada was speechless and spellbound to witness such love between his parents. He watched his parents fall in love all over again. He saw them fall into infinite happiness all over again. he vowed that day that he will confess his feelings to the girl he has known since childhood. His best friend, his light, his Roshini.... Her sister is cute as well. Aryan behave! His insides growled to him.

critics are welcome...love AHL...😉

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devilindisguise thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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acha likhi dude
certain suggestion
leave space btwen paragraphs it enhances readability
i yeah hw can i forward
forward kar sakti to i wud hav updated my own series
bt durn dat update pm ill add urs to
ab to hasde
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: devilindisguise

acha likhi dude
certain suggestion
leave space btwen paragraphs it enhances readability
i yeah hw can i forward
forward kar sakti to i wud hav updated my own series
bt durn dat update pm ill add urs to
ab to hasde


thnx dude...edit karke daloon bolte???
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: heckwidif



thnx dude...edit karke daloon bolte???




if u wish so
go ahead
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Posted: 12 years ago
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n yeah one more suggestion
itne bade paragraphs mat rakh na
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ikr...i wih i get more...but i have a gd fr nthn frnd list..urghhh..i dnt evn have a frnd list
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: heckwidif


ikr...i wih i get more...but i have a gd fr nthn frnd list..urghhh..i dnt evn have a frnd list




wel dats definitely nt my mistake
i always told u to add ppl
converse wid odrs
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyc kafi acha liklia aap .aage bhi likhte raho n itna seeda seeda mat likna u knw i mean ryt AHL . But luved it muaaah
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Originally posted by: shadanshinav

nyc kafi acha liklia aap .aage bhi likhte raho n itna seeda seeda mat likna u knw i mean ryt AHL . But luved it muaaah



thnx love nd i noe wat u mean...lol...btw save the muaah for smone else
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You have nicely written Khushi's feelings! The use of words was wondeful. Enjoyed reading it. :)

I will agree with the suggestions with devilindisguise. Make the story easy on the readers' eyes. Add spaces and use shorter paragraphs! :)

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