the day i fell for you..arhi os

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verisimilitude

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Thanks for the pm..
It was truly poetic.. Your words mesmerized me truly.. It was a smooth flow of emotions. When he held her strong and her description through words how she got into his life how she adjusted to him .. Truly unbeatable. Finally Aryaan finds the role model of love in his parents. It was good.

Try to reduce the font and proper paragraph split would be good. Nice ..

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Sarah

@devilindisguise

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

i can feel u smile lik crazy

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hadiqua

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: devilindisguise
i can feel u smile lik crazy

i am...😃

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hadiqua

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

ohk..am actally blushing now!!! 😳

Originally posted by: Shweta1691
I loved it the first time i read it ( and shamelessly didnt comment) and i love it now!!
Sometimes you just dont need words to see how precious you are in other's lives!
Looking forward to reading more of your work!

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hadiqua

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: harhem
Thanks for the pm..
It was truly poetic.. Your words mesmerized me truly.. It was a smooth flow of emotions. When he held her strong and her description through words how she got into his life how she adjusted to him .. Truly unbeatable. Finally Aryaan finds the role model of love in his parents. It was good.

Try to reduce the font and proper paragraph split would be good. Nice ..

thank you sooo much! never imagined i'ld be getting reviewed in such an amazing manner!!! 😃