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charlotte74

@charlotte74

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: dpotnis
Hey Kavi,
Hope you are doing well., Its ages since I read and commented on your work. Finally caught up with all the chapters of this story and as usual got hooked on to it. You know I love it when you describe Khushi's dress with such details. I can picture it vividly. And all the epic IPK moments in this one. Loved it. Arnav is thinking Lavanya designed the dress.Is it one of the first MUs in the story. Nah, I don't think you have made him that dumb in this one. And oh, Is it time for ER yet?

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Hi Deep!

It's nice hear from my old gang after a long time and would like to let you know I miss you all a lot. What I miss most is haranguing me for a ER 😆

Kavi

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#112

you weave magic girl.. i just loose myself reading your stories..

i thought NK was a nice guy then why is he letting Lavanya use Khushi and take credit of Khushi's hard work??

Arnav is just amazing.. he could melt anyone..

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rati123

@rati123

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Such a beautiful story !! This Arnav is so cute, Angry and ruthless one moment and so caring the next. No wonder Khushi is so confused around him. Thanks for the updates.

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

congrats on the new thread
and great part dear
liked it

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

An extremely busy asli duniya and net problems ensured that i end up so late here...😔

Kavi you have the perfect recipe for putting me in arhi/IPK dreamland. What an update this was, so many memories you have invoked...the orange bangles, the blowing in the eye, the dori trying and arnav enjoying khushi freaking out on food...WOW WOW WOW ⭐️

And the whole scene with arnav dressing up khushi put my silly heart in a dhak dhak override i almost died with the insane speed at which my heart was beating.☺️ Arnav tucking the dupataa at khushi's waist and opening her hair...hai ab mai kya bolon! Speechless with just a goofy smile on my face.

But what i don't get is how come shatir dimaag raizada has not realised that its khushi who is doing La's job...or does he know it already and is just waiting for the right opportunity to strike back at La.

Kavi i don't know how in the world i am going to survive till next friday...I am already day dreaming about the good things to come. 😳

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khushboo

@khushboo1234

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

amazing update

loved their whole act which khushi put up to fool the policewala..arnav ordered jalebis for kushi..it was very sweet of himarnav need to clear nk matter with khushi..

khushi is putting up all the hardwork and lavanya will take all the credit..

and the dori wala scene was written very well..

damn!!!why the security guard chose that moment only..and arrnav got bangles for khushi...

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Its no wonder that I love your stories and writing beyond measure because its simply brilliant! The emotions you painted in Arnav and Khushi within the last two updates - from anger and hatred to concern and caring. Awesome. I loved when Arnav stayed back for dinner at Khushi's place. Buaji-Arnav combination was something which I liked a lot in the serial. In your story I saw a small glimpse of it and felt nostalgic. The dori tying scene - jalebi on lips - finger lingering beneath her eyes - throwing away the hair clips - asking to wear kohl...wonderful scenes..

I hope Arnav catches on Lavanya's deceit soon.

Outstanding part was the last line of this update - the note in the bangle box...

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Congrats on the new thread, hope this mind blowing story has many more.

Amazing and awesome update, absolutely loved it.

Awww love the fact Khushi pretended to be Arnav's girlfriend,

Wow loved the part in auto rickshaw when Arnav removed the dust from khushi's eye, a beautiful moment and he even mentioned her wearing the kohl.

It such a shame they had that argument, I get the feeling Arnav was jealous because Khushi was talking to Suraj and also the text from NK.

I can't believe Arnav does not leave any opportunity to remind Khushi that she is his secretary, I'm sure with Khushi helping with the designing Arnav should reconsider her job role.

Wow loved the part in the green room, it was amazing, so sensual, passionate, tender and very hot indeed.

Love the way Arnav helped tie khushi's Dori and also readjusted her dupatta, a beautiful moment.

Awww love the fact Arnav bought Khushi the bangles and the note was so sweet.

The update was a brilliant read and written exceptionally well.

Eagerly waiting for the next part xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

This was such a great and sweet update
I wonder when Arnav will find out about the dress hmm

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deepa

@deeswarna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#120

i totally loved the dori and the jalebi scenes!!! they were simply beautiful and ones that i think both of them will be remembering for a very long time!

im loving this arnav who has a a very secretive character and despite being the angry young man he has a golden heart and who cares a lot for people close to him but doesnt like to show it. n the way things are moving its almost sure that khushi is among the people that has started to matter to him! but i just cant understand y he has not figured out that all this idea and hardwork is khushi's! or maybe he did but he is waiting to wat extent both girls will lie to him

n 1 thing is totally confusing to me! wasnt arnav supposed to be engaged to sheetal??? instead of spending time with his fiancee he is roaming the lanes of chandni chowk with khushi and working even on a sunday! strange!

mind blowing update. just loved it and eagerly waiting for the next

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