Arhi : Monsoon Rain #2 Chapter 12 upd in new thread

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

congo on the new thread

iam super late - lemme read the update

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

An update that tempts, teases and tantalizes to the hilt just cannot be not loved! And to think that I missed reading this by a day!

I love the changing dynamics between the protagonists in this story...because of which there never is a dull moment in the story. It takes you on a roller coaster and you just enjoy the ride.

I wonder what woudl have ahppened had the guard not intervened. Damn him!

Lavanya is one free laoader. The question is why doesn't Arnav see through her laziness?

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

excellent update kavi - worth the wait

ur update made me re-live some superb scenes of IPK

enjoyed reading the update - lovely one dear

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Nats1219

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

That was amazing ... You took so many of my fav scenarios from the soap and totally made them your own ... It was beautiful

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Leena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Hmmm!!

What is going on in Arnav's head!? He has clearly forgotten abt his engagement ... hasn't he?

Why the hell should he bother abt whats up with NK and her?

A part of me is agitated that he is giving all wrong signals to Khushi when at the end he will not be able to choose her over his already existing fiance!

Why is he letting her dream of something that is only gonna cause her heart break?

Anyways ... i guess this is the way to get to the real part ...

And now i hope he already knows that it is Khushi who is doing the designing and not Lavanya!

I was not completely sure abt it ... though i thought he was indicating so in all his conversations abt Lavanya and designs!

Well lets see whats lined up next!

Thanks Kavi ... as always lovely update! Loved the description of Chandini Chowk! :)

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momoahmd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

awww...
the ending part was so sweeet...
loved the way story is progressing...
waise, now i hv become more curious about sheetal n her relationship with arnav...
plxxx dear continue soon...
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congrrtttsss on new thread...

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preethi.saseeda

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: charlotte74

You went back to read the extension ha?😳in my imagination the extension happens even when I bring a phone or NK or a security guard for you guys😆

Love you right back🤗

How is Vinu?

hmmm u were not precisely there... But yes what could have happened if the security guard had not come... There was this so beautifully written chapter in VOF that could make a perfect extension when there was a mirror in backdrop 😉 ... Really Kavi, I am completely honest if I tell you that it is the most aesthetically written sensual scene that I have read ever... N now can u call me crazy if I relate the mirror scene in VOF to anywhere were mirror is in the backdrop...:) looking at mirror is no more a simple gesture... Definition got changed long back n blame u my girl for writing so beautifully... There have been couple of ARSHI scenes with mirror backdrop in IPK but Kavi u did the best justice ever to the prop :)

Vinu is busy with work n other stuff and she has not been on IF for past two weeks now... Looks like she will get back on IF only after Monday... She is missing u way too much... Love from her too :)

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Arshinme

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Hey Kavi,

I read monsoon rain again and I'm sorry I said its not gripping..it indeed is beautiful,the progression of the story and all.. I guess I just felt like that b'coz I was reading in parts...

Apologies once again

Neelima.

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imaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#99

waooo soper sizzling updated ...love it ...and arnav's gift just love it ...you so beautifully rearrange the dust in eyes seen...and arnav note it was also quite...

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yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#100

THanks for bringing back the epic moment of IPK...when arnav saw her in the costume...arnav has to know that the costume has been made by khushi and not lavanya...he is all praising lavanya...she did not even spent a minute in preparing, purchasing the material and all...khushi deserves the credit...nice update...thanks for the PM