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Anamika100

@Anamika100

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

You are able to write what the rest of us call Arnav and Khushi 'chemistry' so well. You convey feeling with mere words...describing a touch on a Bare arm, a flick on the lips with a finger that goes to the lips..wow.

Arnav and Khushi interactions are getting more and more sensual and intimate. It was a lovely touch for you to draw in IPK situations/scenes. Specially loved the policeman and the bangel scene.

Arnav appears to be drawn in way too deep since he is so hostile to Suraj, NK, the goons...anyone that comes between him and Khushi or appears to harm her. Does he realize how much he is attracted...

He is definitely suspicious about who the real designer is...I hope both NK andLavanya get exposed soon and Kbushi gets her due recognition. Khushi also is realizing what a good person he is and the whole bangle incident just melted my heart. I am sure he too has a past that has shaped him into who he is today. Waiting for that.

I am always left with such a sinking feeling when I see the end.of the update..like its ending already...no...I want more Arnav and Khushi.

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vgedin

@vgedin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

I prefer the original, but Rajesh Khanna in the video kinda ruins it. So heres a much hotter version.. of what we hope for Arnav and Khushi 😳

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w_CKlMfwtRg[/YOUTUBE]

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Wow ... twigs this is really good !😉

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neha2013g

@neha2013g

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

nice story... loved the update

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srya

@srya

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#125

hayee the attraction ...mind blowing...update soon...

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SIMI

@dieforasr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

I prefer a bolder as well as beautiful version..😉

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OdBvP3MosCQ[/YOUTUBE]

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spongebobchick

@spongebobchick

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

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Another absolutely brilliant FF!!! I love the hidden secret behind Arnavs engagement coupled with how he got his foothold into business. The underlying tension between a feisty Khushi and an ever-so egotistical Arnav is amazing; however, I love how you showed his soft side following the incident between Khushi and the 'thugs'. The change is Arnav's character is always so sharp, and like Khushi you can't help but not be angry with him anymore! I think chapter 6 was definitely a turning point in their relationship, if the man hadn't have walked in I think we might have seen the completion of the Diwali Kiss (Miss)!

Your stories are always so amazing! I'm glad I finally got the chance to read the chapters!! I can't wait to see what happens next.

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Dimz13

@Dimz13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

This is pure magic...pure magic. I mis IPk so much. Thank god you are around Charlotte74.

So many things from the show...almost kiss...the trembling Kushi that only Sanaya can potray so well, the churiya gift, blowing in the eyes...oh my...,!

Both seem to have forgotten for the weekend that there is the shadow of Sheetal. Both have given into they baser instincts.

Well Lavanya has sort of dug her own grave...wonder when Arnav will figure it out.

I love Arnav all going possessive of Kushi...showing big eyes at the shopkeeper and neighbour and then getting mad at NKs for sending Kushi messages. Love love love this chapter. Have to read it again.

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@sherlockthor

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

charlotte how did i miss this one?!

one of your best writings! just the way i love it! sexual tension and sensuality , without the explicit stuff! perfect!

and on a lighter note, arnav seems to have forgotten he is engaged! :P

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ziya-farhannish

@ziya-farhannish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#130

sorry for the delay in comment!

nice update! and i have a feeling arnav knows its khushis work, if not hope he realises it soon. good that you cleared the MU between them, to think sanki had wasted away years on that MU!