Arhi : Monsoon Rain #2 Chapter 12 upd in new thread

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dpotnis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Hey Kavi,

Hope you are doing well., Its ages since I read and commented on your work. Finally caught up with all the chapters of this story and as usual got hooked on to it. You know I love it when you describe Khushi's dress with such details. I can picture it vividly. And all the epic IPK moments in this one. Loved it. Arnav is thinking Lavanya designed the dress.Is it one of the first MUs in the story. Nah, I don't think you have made him that dumb in this one. And oh, Is it time for ER yet?

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farhas

@farhas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

it was awesome as usual last update i thought there is no fight and MU between them but now arnav has again started with secretary thing and finaly gifting her a bangle she should not forgive him easily and should ignore him...and this dumbo arnav did'nt find that it was designed by khushi hope he finds that soon...is he jealous of NK talking to her secretly??

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daljeet

@daljeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Loved the update dear.

I read 2 days back. But busy. My college is reopening tomorrow. So no detail comment this time. Sorry.

But really loved the update, especially the last lines. That was beautiful. Your Arnav is always very romantic, not cheesy kind but yet romantic!!!!!

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gifttag

@gifttag

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Awesome update.. Written beautifully.
All the emotions captured wonderfully.
Thank you for the Update.

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ananya321

@ananya321

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

congrats for the new thread ...
nice update

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rechup

@rechup

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Waiting for the next update...

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Chochoo83

@Chochoo83

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

awsum chapter😊

loved it

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Ayesha

@stunning.ayesha

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Congrats for new thread
Awesome update
Loved it
Update soon

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_disha_

@_disha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Kavi,, i swear i can't thank you enough for coming back on IF with this story after VOF.

What a fabulous update.

Your stories always capture the essence of Ipkknd in its most purest and sensuous form.

Even though i have read in so many comments posted before me ... i cannot help but repeat how you have incorporated those classic Arnav and Khushi moments from the show and given them a new life.

Like i said earlier also...and with this update again i really feel even more sure of the fact that Arnav knows Khushi is the one designing the dress...he is just playing her along.

The Jalebi and Dori scene ☺️ ... nothing i say will be a good enough compliment i swear but it is so apparent that you write dil se and so it reaches dil tak !!❤️

So now Suraj done , Ria done ... Is it time for Dr Manav ??😆

And congrats on the new thread !🤗

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charlotte74

@charlotte74

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: Arshinme
Hey Kavi,
I read monsoon rain again and I'm sorry I said its not gripping..it indeed is beautiful,the progression of the story and all.. I guess I just felt like that b'coz I was reading in parts...

Apologies once again

Neelima.

I completely agree with you.

It is always better when you read a story in its entirety, rather than in parts.