Arhi : Monsoon Rain #2 Chapter 12 upd in new thread - Page 8

That was very nice the way Khushi lied to the policeman... battling her eyes :-) :-)... I am still visualizing the scene and laughing.

I did not know the history of Chandni Chowk. Glad to read about it.

Buying material and modeling the dress for Arnav is very well written :-). Somehow I knew Arnav is going to buy those bangles for Khushi :-). Continue soon.

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya

Res...really late😲

Blow hot and blow cold - that's our Arnav and Khushi and it is a vicious cycle that continues and I LOVE IT DAMMIT!!!!

I am gonna go scene by scene this time...

Picking her up from the bus stop - Awww!!! That's an aww moment for me. ASR all serious but caught by the police man for picking up his girl friend from the bus stop. Cho Chweet...Well, I don't think I can be hammered for calling him a teenage boy coz his reaction to Khushi's batting lashes and her touch are reminiscent of a hormonal teenager in the throes of his first love.

Ride in the Auto - OMG OMG OMG

Did you just include my favourite blowing the dust particle in her eye scene...I just dies and went to heaven. I love the way his hand lingers and in IPK he even swirls her lock of hair nearby, indulging himself...Kavi...you are genius at this. What's to not love about it and you :) He is enjoying her proximity and nearness is not enough anymore. he feels the need to touch her, feel her and tease her (about the kajal).

The Road Crossing - I loved how Khushi is protective of him and the way he teased her to help him. I loved it for the way she hugged his hand. Did she by the way hold it to her side, his hand to the side of her breast?...huuu...swoon 😳

She grabbed to herself and in my imagination it is against her breasts 😉

Bickernerwala - He couldn't have made it cleaer to Khushi about what he wants. He wants her lips and he is seriously taking some liberties here...touching her lips ...okay it is with jalebi...Two questions here...

1. Does he sense her intense attraction too that he is able to take that kind of liberty?

I don't think Arnav put too much thought into that action. He was teasing her...maybe just flirting a little. I think he likes to rile her up a little bit just to see her get all hot and bothered 😉.

I don't think he realizes the consequences of his actions yet.

2. Why didn't Khushi want to eat? Coz it's expensive and she could not pay? She is a foodie and I was surprised she didn't want to eat.

I guess she just feel like eating at the time 😆

Blowing Cold - Arnav is such a meanie...(b$#%^#d) sometimes. So, he is jealous of Suraj and NK and decided to Insult Khushi ...that she is a secretary and not a designer. Maybe a fact that he believes in but the way he said it...tch tch Arnav...you'll eat your words soon enough.

Khushi's reaction - One of the things I love about khushi's. She's spunky, and my God can she give it back? I loved the way she told him off. yes, whether it is safe or not out there, girls need to fend for themselves by looking out for themselves. I'm waiting to learn the hardships he had experienced though.

The Hottest Scene of the Update - It was a classic KAVI writing. Can you imagine, I felt like killing that guard. She touched all over and Khushi managed to stay on her feet...heehhehe. I haven't come across anyone who can make these scenes as hot as you do but still maintain the aesthetic beauty of it.

Bangles - I agree with Khushi...he won't let her love him completely by taking those hurtful words like the 'she's my secretary' and then he goes and buys her bangles. But this scene was lovely for the words he wrote more than the bangles themselves. That she was harsh and it doesn't suit her. he is getting to her and he likes the way she is. Isn't that we all dream about...a guy falling for you for who you are not and not whom he expects you to be.

Loved it :)

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya

Res...really late😲

Blow hot and blow cold - that's our Arnav and Khushi and it is a vicious cycle that continues and I LOVE IT DAMMIT!!!!

I am gonna go scene by scene this time...

Picking her up from the bus stop - Awww!!! That's an aww moment for me. ASR all serious but caught by the police man for picking up his girl friend from the bus stop. Cho Chweet...Well, I don't think I can be hammered for calling him a teenage boy coz his reaction to Khushi's batting lashes and her touch are reminiscent of a hormonal teenager in the throes of his first love.

Ride in the Auto - OMG OMG OMG

Did you just include my favourite blowing the dust particle in her eye scene...I just dies and went to heaven. I love the way his hand lingers and in IPK he even swirls her lock of hair nearby, indulging himself...Kavi...you are genius at this. What's to not love about it and you :) He is enjoying her proximity and nearness is not enough anymore. he feels the need to touch her, feel her and tease her (about the kajal).

The Road Crossing - I loved how Khushi is protective of him and the way he teased her to help him. I loved it for the way she hugged his hand. Did she by the way hold it to her side, his hand to the side of her breast?...huuu...swoon 😳

Bickernerwala - He couldn't have made it cleaer to Khushi about what he wants. He wants her lips and he is seriously taking some liberties here...touching her lips ...okay it is with jalebi...Two questions here...

1. Does he sense her intense attraction too that he is able to take that kind of liberty?

2. Why didn't Khushi want to eat? Coz it's expensive and she could not pay? She is a foodie and I was surprised she didn't want to eat.

Blowing Cold - Arnav is such a meanie...(b$#%^#d) sometimes. So, he is jealous of Suraj and NK and decided to Insult Khushi ...that she is a secretary and not a designer. Maybe a fact that he believes in but the way he said it...tch tch Arnav...you'll eat your words soon enough.

Khushi's reaction - One of the things I love about khushi's. She's spunky, and my God can she give it back? I loved the way she told him off. yes, whether it is safe or not out there, girls need to fend for themselves by looking out for themselves. I'm waiting to learn the hardships he had experienced though.

The Hottest Scene of the Update - It was a classic KAVI writing. Can you imagine, I felt like killing that guard. She touched all over and Khushi managed to stay on her feet...heehhehe. I haven't come across anyone who can make these scenes as hot as you do but still maintain the aesthetic beauty of it.

Bangles - I agree with Khushi...he won't let her love him completely by taking those hurtful words like the 'she's my secretary' and then he goes and buys her bangles. But this scene was lovely for the words he wrote more than the bangles themselves. That she was harsh and it doesn't suit her. he is getting to her and he likes the way she is. Isn't that we all dream about...a guy falling for you for who you are not and not whom he expects you to be.

Loved it :)

Originally posted by: charlotte74

Hi Sandhya,

Thanks so much for taking time as always to make it worth the while for me. As i mentioned in your thread earlier I suck at writing comments.

I wonder sometimes if it is my writing or comments like yours that make the story look good 😆

Love you for that 🤗

PS: Some of my comments in-line above.

-Kavi