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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update
He shouldn't've taken her with him afterall she is his wife and its get right
But I think he'll take her with him when he will finish his degree and find a house for him and get to live in comfortably
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Posted: 11 years ago
i love the way their relation is progressing..in the most natural way..thanks to arnav,,,,


i will miss u????? she didnt expect him to take her with him??..he just came to take his books only??not khushi kya?
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Posted: 11 years ago
will arnav take khushi with him if she ask??
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful update...
Oh.. ArShi are separated now... 😭
Already waiting for their reunion... 😛
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update Jenny...😊

"One day when you are older, remember this sunset and this breeze, remember these old steps and that boatman's song, but most of all remember what you see in my eyes today..".

these lines fill me with some unknown fear...

Khushi is trying every bit to be deemed fit as Arnab's wife... and I can understand the hurt she must have faced when she learned that Arnav did not take her along or even talk to her...

Arnav did plan to meet her before going... but I am not sure, if he can take her away from home now.. he has to be settled and his exams are also there... it is indeed an ill timing for him to shift... but i know he will manage and take Khushi along with him soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vgedin

Twiggy

~Edit~

"Today she stands on the brink of womanhood, where she is neither a child nor a woman. A short lived twilight phase to gently transition the innocent brightness of a day into the intriguing beauty of a starry night. I can be the catalyst to this transition, but do I want to be? "
That is just the point, isn't it? And I admire Arnab for even questioning himself in this manner, rather than thinking on the lines of staking his claim over his rights as a "husband". Khushi is truly lucky, to have been married to a man as honorable as him in that time, a man who cares for her childhood.

The scene at the footsteps of the ghat was so serene and beautiful... lyrical. Enveloped in love and tenderness, that is a moment I am sure the two of them will treasure, a memory to revisit to get through the difficult times. And you also highlighted the fact that she possesses a sharp and astute mind, that is able to process and understand the things that are happening around her.. except perhaps the matters of the heart 😛 And Arnab has also noted this, another wonderful facet of his young wife.

Khushi's growth from the child with a doll, to this child-woman who feels like her Arnab's wife has been so seamless. Arnab has allowed her the time to naturally grow into this phase of life and now she has come to a point where she worships the ground he walks on. He has managed to earn her unwavering faith in him.

Oh, but the end! He was planning to take her with him earlier, right? And then this! My poor dear Khushi, and Arnab is also miserable without her. Will he take his bride with him this time? I'm worried... 😒

But the update was lovely, Jenny. I felt like I was basking in the glow of warm sunshine and a light breeze at the bank of a river, such is the beauty of your words 😊

PS - The Non-Cooperation was not unsuccessful, in fact it was far from it. It shook up the British forces. The reason for all the frustration was Gandhi's untimely revocation of the Movement following a violent incident at the Chauri-Chaura police station. Many (including me) still feel that had Gandhi not done that, India would have achieved independence a lot earlier.

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Posted: 11 years ago
There was something melancholic abt today's update... certainly nothing to do with Arnav leaving...
I guess it was the way Arnav stated about remembering the day later when she was older! Why did it leave me with an unsettling feeling?

I wonder how things are going to shape up here on... They sure are going to get separated ... but for how long?
And to top it ... Arnav's indecisiveness with regards to the political situation! Now that he is going to be away from his father's sheltered influence! I just hope there is nothing untoward impending!

This is going to be a turning point in their lives i suppose!! Both their lives are to get undergo a crucial change ... for good or bad... will have to wait and see!

Jenny! can I please request you to expedite the next update please? :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it Jenny.
It was really the way things were occuring way back in 1920's. You know it reminded me a bit of the moovies Baalika Badhu and Amanush. Both sitting on the banks and the boat man singing the song was nostalgic.
In the late spring epilogue 2 you have mentioned Arnav Foster as Arnab!😉 Guess you are so involved in writing this that even while proof reading it got overlooked!
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update..
thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
I know he wants her with him but he has no income
and is living by a friend

crap they are gong to be separated

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