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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome one again.Just loved their conversation at the river bank.When Arnav decided to leave the home he was thinking about leaving with Khushi.but when the real situation arise he left without even meeting her.I think her anger against him is justified.had tears when read the that Khushi's I'll miss you.Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome dear jenny
thank u for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vgedin

Twiggy

~Edit~

"Today she stands on the brink of womanhood, where she is neither a child nor a woman. A short lived twilight phase to gently transition the innocent brightness of a day into the intriguing beauty of a starry night. I can be the catalyst to this transition, but do I want to be? "
That is just the point, isn't it? And I admire Arnab for even questioning himself in this manner, rather than thinking on the lines of staking his claim over his rights as a "husband". Khushi is truly lucky, to have been married to a man as honorable as him in that time, a man who cares for her childhood.

The scene at the footsteps of the ghat was so serene and beautiful... lyrical. Enveloped in love and tenderness, that is a moment I am sure the two of them will treasure, a memory to revisit to get through the difficult times. And you also highlighted the fact that she possesses a sharp and astute mind, that is able to process and understand the things that are happening around her.. except perhaps the matters of the heart 😛 And Arnab has also noted this, another wonderful facet of his young wife.

Khushi's growth from the child with a doll, to this child-woman who feels like her Arnab's wife has been so seamless. Arnab has allowed her the time to naturally grow into this phase of life and now she has come to a point where she worships the ground he walks on. He has managed to earn her unwavering faith in him.

Oh, but the end! He was planning to take her with him earlier, right? And then this! My poor dear Khushi, and Arnab is also miserable without her. Will he take his bride with him this time? I'm worried... 😒

But the update was lovely, Jenny. I felt like I was basking in the glow of warm sunshine and a light breeze at the bank of a river, such is the beauty of your words 😊

PS - The Non-Cooperation was not unsuccessful, in fact it was far from it. It shook up the British forces. The reason for all the frustration was Gandhi's untimely revocation of the Movement following a violent incident at the Chauri-Chaura police station. Many (including me) still feel that had Gandhi not done that, India would have achieved independence a lot earlier.


Twiggy, I shall be lazy and steal your comment because I think I cannot add to such a perfect reply to such a perfect post. 😆

If only Arnav's father had not been precipitous...Arnav had already changed his mind. Thammi was right; Khushi had begun to 'bind his feet'.

@bold: my sentiments exactly; I could not have said it better...


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Posted: 11 years ago

finally da updt...
amazing updt jenny...
love da way arshi spending sometime with eachother..beautifully portrayed..nd da way how maturely she anwsered arnav abt da noncoperation movemnt..indeed her transition from a innocent child to a mature woman...
oh god..arnav father said arnab to leave da house..i thought arnav take her along with him..bt no..nd become restless without khushi...
is he gonna take his bride with him or nt..??
felt really bad for khushi..bt glad dat she let arnav
knw her feeling dat she was nt happy without him..poor soul..
wht gonna b arnav's decision...egarly waiting 4 dat..
continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
kushi is growing up there so much and arnav redefines intensity wow nice update
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Posted: 11 years ago
wooowww.thiss ws jst too beaaautiful.honestly the best updaaate..im.sure arnav will tk her wid him..rite rite ?? :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was really amazing luved each n every word I felt I was in that era it was so beautifully described
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Posted: 11 years ago
again a poignant beautiful epi
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Posted: 11 years ago
Can't have enough of this story.really this arnav just commands respect.just awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
It's becoming an eternal classic day by day...

here's the song...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hf2-iXlf_3k[/YOUTUBE]

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