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Posted: 11 years ago
What a beautiful update dear!!! The words spoken to Khushi by Arnav on the ghat .. Remember the boatman's song , the look in his eyes ... It was so beautiful. I feel like something bad will happen.. I am scared now .. I simply love and respect this Arnav
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the PM.
Budding love and tough decisions.
What will Arnab do?
Can't wait to find out.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww 😳 amazing update jenny 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
you amaze me with your writings every time!! I have no words to say!!! Wonderful!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful update just loved it. So arnav moved out of his house and khushi is fully into him. Hope he soon takes her too with him. Thks for the pm dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
That's a cliffhanger!
How am i gonna wait for the next update? :-(
Really loved the update.
Especially their convo at the ghat.
It was worth the stalking ;-)
Please do update soon. .
Can't wait to read Arnab's reply to Khushi's confession. . And i really want him to take her away to live with him once he gets a job.
Waiting for the next update!
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was beautiful written update...
arnav gonna leave khushi???
i really love this part... i love the arshi moment
eagerly waiting 4 the next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
This story is getting more n more intense...i loved the way it is potrayed...i wonder why such seriousness n deepness in found only in bengali setup stories😛...well todays update was great n heart touchingly beautiful😊...what happen to his exams has he given them...will he become a doctor...n come for khushi???
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dear thanks for pm.

The update is emotional.😭 Poor Khushi.😭

Khushi loves Arnab and Arnab loves Khushi.❤️ Khushi will not understand the feelings because Khushi is very young. If Arnab is with her, Arnav will make Khushi understand the relation, the meaning of marriage.

Arnab needs to take Khushi with him. Khushi cannot live if Arnab is not with Khushi.

Dear update.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vgedin

Twiggy

~Edit~

"Today she stands on the brink of womanhood, where she is neither a child nor a woman. A short lived twilight phase to gently transition the innocent brightness of a day into the intriguing beauty of a starry night. I can be the catalyst to this transition, but do I want to be? "
That is just the point, isn't it? And I admire Arnab for even questioning himself in this manner, rather than thinking on the lines of staking his claim over his rights as a "husband". Khushi is truly lucky, to have been married to a man as honorable as him in that time, a man who cares for her childhood.

The scene at the footsteps of the ghat was so serene and beautiful... lyrical. Enveloped in love and tenderness, that is a moment I am sure the two of them will treasure, a memory to revisit to get through the difficult times. And you also highlighted the fact that she possesses a sharp and astute mind, that is able to process and understand the things that are happening around her.. except perhaps the matters of the heart 😛 And Arnab has also noted this, another wonderful facet of his young wife.

Khushi's growth from the child with a doll, to this child-woman who feels like her Arnab's wife has been so seamless. Arnab has allowed her the time to naturally grow into this phase of life and now she has come to a point where she worships the ground he walks on. He has managed to earn her unwavering faith in him.

Oh, but the end! He was planning to take her with him earlier, right? And then this! My poor dear Khushi, and Arnab is also miserable without her. Will he take his bride with him this time? I'm worried... 😒

But the update was lovely, Jenny. I felt like I was basking in the glow of warm sunshine and a light breeze at the bank of a river, such is the beauty of your words 😊

PS - The Non-Cooperation was not unsuccessful, in fact it was far from it. It shook up the British forces. The reason for all the frustration was Gandhi's untimely revocation of the Movement following a violent incident at the Chauri-Chaura police station. Many (including me) still feel that had Gandhi not done that, India would have achieved independence a lot earlier.




Thanks for your kind words, Twiggy and am glad you're enjoying the story..😊
@PS I agree that most history books are unanimous in their opinion that the Non-Cooperation movement can't be termed as unsuccessful even though it had failed to achieve what it had set out to mainly because it was responsible for transitioning the Indian Nationalism from middleclass to mass basis. That was a big achievement in itself and a significant milestone of the Freedom Movement.

But we know that now because we have the benefit of hindsight (Also called a historian's necessary vice) that people actually living in those times didn't. And often people who actually lived through a 'historical' moment percieved it in a way that is drastically different from how we percieve it now, because they didn't have the benefit of hindsight...


Edited by IPK007 - 11 years ago

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