Ashlok FF:DESIRE CALLS...Chapt-24,pg-149 UPDATED!

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maivelli

@maivelli

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#761

u r such erotic writer don know what to say
saying good and nice means just comenting ...

its actually breath taking update
i guess i can never write such erotic story ever in my life ...

but u make me wait alot plz dear make sure u will update as soon as possible

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Anusha

@Anusha16

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#762

hmmm... wat to say teshina???

the first person I have encountered to ever use the word erotic...😉

and obviously the RED RIDING HOOD... seriously a bad wolf to a sexy wolf???😆

it's nice to know that astha kirloskar DOES drive shlok agnihotri insane...😛

if it could only happen in the reality...😕

Lovely update... rather SEXY update...good work yaar...

now that you have stepped on to the HOTWA department... I want more sexy updates... please do so...😛

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AlbusDumbeldore

@AlbusDumbeldore

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#763

U r really a great writer .aftrr reading the last line I cannot wait for the next upfate please update soon

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Soujanya

@Vsoujanya

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#764

Oh boy who is this Punk who wants to kill Shlok. The chemistry between Ashlok is amazing! Loved the update. 😃

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avi_ashi

@avi_ashi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#765

omg.. Wat a scene u described.. Truely amazing..

my heart beat were racing soo fast.. Lol.. I imagined the whole scene.. I want more..😆 just loved it.. Update the next part soon dear..

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#766

Aastha and Aastha's weird imagination...

Pagal ladki...

And Shlok he is so hot...

Again amazing update dear...

Please continue soon...

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#767

Yaar you write juts one scene and make us insane.how can someone write dark stories so perfectly? at least i can' i can juts think to write dark arts abut don;t think can meet to 1% of it...
Just loved it...

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#768

Originally posted by: pt311288
u r such erotic writer don know what to say
saying good and nice means just comenting ...

its actually breath taking update
i guess i can never write such erotic story ever in my life ...

but u make me wait alot plz dear make sure u will update as soon as possible

Hey i was saying same.even i am thinking to start my next one as dark story.but when i read this, all my dreams are trashed... no i can't...

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Shreya

@Secret_Giggle

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#769

Nice update.

Thanks for the pm.

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Dee James

@DJames

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#770

I don't remember reading this FF before but damn good. You write so beautifully and your thoughts are clear. Thank you for the pm. I am going to sit and read through the entire story in a day or two. But I can guess it is going to be an amazing read! 😊. Great going and please do continue 👏.