Arshi SS-'Adopted'. LINK TO THREAD-2 ADDED ON PG-1 30-11

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vandana73

@vandana73

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#281

do not finish it just yet !

the story has barely started !

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foesb

@foesb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

I really like the way you are carrying forward the story. Rather than taking the common route of Anjali reprimanding Arnav I think what ever you have in store for us is far more better,besides I think Khushi gave a good earful to Arnav and when she possesses the ability to defend her own self I think an interference of a third party is not needed at all ,just my opinion😊 So please continue I really enjoy the pace and flow of the story.

Now coming to the update, Arnav's monologue showed us what type of a man he is, he disguises himself as a person filled with lot of attitude in the form of ASR where as for his family he is a totally different person. So he has done a back ground check up on Khushi, typical ASR! But over all it sums up to only one thing, that he is falling for he is wife and since he wants to prevent it he hurls baseless accusations at Khushi. Anjali departing for work was a nice scene, with hyper Khushi in the picture,most prominent was the fact that great ASR feeling left out and unattended and then feeling a " hint" of jealousy! Again it was an amazing update, continue soon, eagerly waiting to see how you will fix everything😃

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tina_1234

@tina_1234

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#283

A ff wid lots of arhi scenes

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scarlet2012

@scarlet2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#284

The storyline is going good please continue it...

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Newbiesoapfan

@Newbiesoapfan

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#285

Loving it... finally we see that Arnav is not concerned about education and aukaat... he is himself with his family... why can't he be himself with Khushi?

Good to see a confident Anji... want Khushi too to be the same!

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SS88

@SS88

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#286

Khushi is such a sweetheart. I do hope she gets encouragement and support to study further. Arnav jealous? Why? Does he want ehr to dote on him like she does on Anjali?
P.S. I love your story. Please continue writing, and finish it as you have imagined it in your head. The story will lose it's charm if you hurry it now.