Arshi SS-'Adopted'. LINK TO THREAD-2 ADDED ON PG-1 30-11 - Page 31

Originally posted by: rulama

Loved the way Khushi was thinking about Anjali that made Arnav though skeptic, still ill at ease!

Loved it dear.

Lage raho, Harinder Bitiyaa! We are with you through out the journey. 👏

You have retained Khushi's generous nature. It is good to see Anjali taking small steps towards independence.

Glad you added envy to ASR's nature.😆

Smita

wonderful...at least in his mind arnav knows his faults

See, Dil, these last 3 pages should tell you how much support you have. And more than the great Smitaji (hey, I mean that ) ne bhi aap ko go ahead diya hai.

Now no more doubts, lage raho!😃

This story cant end in 2-3 updates..it has to tke a long tym..m loving the story but could u plz include more dialogues in the updates.. :)

I like the way the story is moving forward! Characterizations are well in place... Wouldn't recommend that u complete the stories within 2-3 updates...

Have one request though- Please complete the story...

How old is Anjali's daughter, Kavya?

Glad that Anjali is moving forward in her life and engaging herself in her profession!

Continue soon!

hey...

Originally posted by: foesb

I really like the way you are carrying forward the story. Rather than taking the common route of Anjali reprimanding Arnav I think what ever you have in store for us is far more better,besides I think Khushi gave a good earful to Arnav and when she possesses the ability to defend her own self I think an interference of a third party is not needed at all ,just my opinion😊 So please continue I really enjoy the pace and flow of the story.

Now coming to the update, Arnav's monologue showed us what type of a man he is, he disguises himself as a person filled with lot of attitude in the form of ASR where as for his family he is a totally different person. So he has done a back ground check up on Khushi, typical ASR! But over all it sums up to only one thing, that he is falling for he is wife and since he wants to prevent it he hurls baseless accusations at Khushi. Anjali departing for work was a nice scene, with hyper Khushi in the picture,most prominent was the fact that great ASR feeling left out and unattended and then feeling a " hint" of jealousy! Again it was an amazing update, continue soon, eagerly waiting to see how you will fix everything😃

This is a great analysis of the update. ASR is tied up in the tangles that his own nature creates for him and prevents him from seeing the good around him, but then whi could ever resist a gem like Khushi. So he is now beginning to see er radiance through the fog of his prejudices.
And good on Khushi for giving him a earful. She can stand up for herself, well she;s had a lifetime of practice.

I love the story so far and I look forward to seeing where you take this.

okkk...first of all i love ur hindi...absolutely wonderful it is...bilkul khushi hindi...

hame behat prasannta mehsus ho rai hai ye dekh kar ki khushi k shabdo ko bilkul shudh hindi me prastut kiya ja rha hai...dhanya waad...

ok isnt dis khushi too cute...

nd yeah i want to get into details of arnav's char...u are opening the layers of his char...the frst layer which is ruthlessness...is already out now...looking forward to the oder ones...i guess the best one lies beneath which will be for khushi ofcourse...

is he jealous...ofcourse he should be...dis jerk deserves her ignorance...he needs to feel wat he is missing in life...jealous nd possessive arnav is my fav...how would he have been behaved if he had a Nk here...maza aa jata yaar...

ok by no means u are ending it in 2-3 updates...after a long time we have got a good writer...in all the pms dat i sent u...i told u need to write more...so take my advice very very seriously...

nice one.. but short update.. itz ok... in my view, your ss/ff is a gud entertainer... and you are a regular updater if you are continuing the story i will defenitely follow..